christianbraun 2015-12-14 14:13
You really made a effort on the texts!
Would have been nice to have some more features as just gowing right or left or press a button, but I really like text adventures!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD34 → The Parable of the Knight, the Clown and the Lawyer
By cgriff
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Mood | 161 | 3.50 | ||
| Humor | 206 | 3.00 | ||
| Innovation | 478 | 3.16 | ||
| Overall | 591 | 3.11 | ||
| Fun | 726 | 2.79 | ||
| Theme | 735 | 3.37 | ||
| Coolness | 2043 | 28 |
You really made a effort on the texts!
Would have been nice to have some more features as just gowing right or left or press a button, but I really like text adventures!
Nice, I love a good Twine game.
Nice use of Twine! :) well written too
Boop.
Nicely conceived short story. I really like your writing.
I was surprised, good job!
And no, you don't need a mouse to play, runs fine on iOS ;)
Great bit of creative writing.
Twine is super cool! One of these days I need to jam in it. Impressive writing - is there an ending? I couldn't seem to find one.
This was a really well-done text adventure. I think it's the writing that did it! I wish there was more branching paths that didn't quite so obviously meet up again. Also, it's a bit of a shame that there's no real ending. well done!
Heh! Not much to say about this without spoiling it for everyone else. I feel foolish, but in a nice way. The writing is good (though I caught a typo: "roon" should be "room").
Not much to it in terms of gameplay, but it's an entertaining story, and wouldn't work nearly as well in a non-interactive format.
Beautifully written. I really enjoyed it!
I can't even think on how to improve the experience. I think it's perfect as it is. Maybe some background music would be nice?
Great job!