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The Unfortunate Demise of William

By jooshkins

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness360
Humor5112.87
Audio6282.17
Graphics7872.71
Mood9202.33
Innovation9502.23
Theme10042.23
Fun10162.16
Overall10652.25

Comments

manicminer 2015-04-21 17:19

Not entirely a game, but definitely an amusing five minutes - good job man, I bet you learned a lot :)

richiebranson 2015-04-21 23:55

Pretty cool interactive story. The pixel art brought me back to 1989, lol. Good work!

rodobodolfo 2015-04-22 02:17

This was fun! Congrats on your first game!

hessesadventure 2015-04-22 02:20

A neat idea. A little unclear at times.

ultravisitor 2015-04-22 02:23

Unfortunate indeed! I hope you make more interactive fiction games. pasting that dog head on the character was a really good idea. I think you could develop that into an interesting composite art style. I felt bad for Williamson. He seemed only too eager to please.

roryd 2015-04-23 01:34

Good job for your first game! It's like an interactive story. It was very amusing!

deadfragment 2015-04-24 23:12

A lot of thought has gone into the story which I appreciate, the transition between rooms felt a bit sudden and could've been made smoother, the graphic style was nice and had some decent sound effects.

-Neith

pkenney 2015-04-24 23:12

Good first time out, congrats!

archonthewizard 2015-04-25 01:18

Pretty funny. Fun lil 2min adventure

onlyslightly 2015-04-25 15:08

:( poor william. I liked the surprise when you realized the dog faced man...was a dog faced man :) It had a surreal quality to it and I quite enjoyed it

maesk 2015-05-04 13:07

Interestingly weird. Or weirdly interesting.

deadbodyoutline 2015-05-05 22:21

Pretty unconventional entry :) I liked the story, very funny! Got a NullReference "something" error when attacking the first opponent. Also, when moving through the hall, some background objects, indicating moving could be useful.

Keep developing! :D