marcellus 2015-04-20 13:48
Well done for a first entry, there is a good idea behind this game. Too bad you didn't have enough time.
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By b3jh24
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Theme | 87 | 4.00 | ||
| Mood | 329 | 3.20 | ||
| Innovation | 453 | 3.25 | ||
| Fun | 580 | 3.00 | ||
| Humor | 619 | 2.60 | ||
| Overall | 658 | 3.06 | ||
| Graphics | 1006 | 2.19 | ||
| Coolness | 2143 | 24 |
Well done for a first entry, there is a good idea behind this game. Too bad you didn't have enough time.
The concept is good, but it lacks of content :(
I love the idea but it lack of content.
Good start! I wish there were more.
Love the idea, keep working on it!
I see a lot of potential here. It was a good approach on the theme, it just lack content
I liked the use of theme :) Unfortunately I think something may have been wrong for me - there were no text options on the right hand side during the "negotiation" section :/
Solid. You really need to develop it further and add a linear storyline with bigger and bigger consequences from your negotiations.
A great concept! I think it could have been improved by designing it a little more on the "game-y" side... each character you have to interact with might have a different personality (labelled on-screen after you talk with them for a bit) that responds better to some types of tactics (the "tactic" of each dialogue option could be labelled on-screen) than others, etc. Welcome to LD! Best of luck in the future.
Interesting concept but I got up to the negotiation screen, entered some values but then couldn't executre or offer the trade. Still, cool to see something different.
Very interesting idea, but without more of an indication as to what the player is supposed to do, it can't be that much fun. Good work with the short amount of time you had though, welcome to Ludum Dare, and good luck in the future!