Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD30 → The IT Support
By epiphanyg
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Theme | 143 | 3.67 | ||
| Fun | 289 | 3.20 | ||
| Overall | 414 | 3.18 | ||
| Coolness | 2075 | 14 |
I always like Twine games, because I like a good story.
I play a lot of Ace Attorney so I expected things to be explained in a cool plot-twisty way at the end. As such, the ending was a little disappointing. Ah well, my standareds are probably just too high.
Thanks for the feedback xgeovanni! This was my first game with Twine, I certainly intend to plan out more interesting twists in future games.
Is Sarah okay?
Yeah, the ending felt like a bit of an anti-climax, sorry. But I loved the build-up before that. I was fascinated to know what was happening to Sarah and the game completely subverted my expectations. (I was prepared for it to be standard day-in-the-life of an IT support guy.)
@dickpoelen Yes, she's fine. I think I need to write a sequel at some point. ;)
@Snoother Thanks for the feedback! Yes the ending was very anti-climactic sadly. I wrote it last night and got very very tired by that point.
It started off quite interesting, but the end was indeed a bit sudden and anti-climatic XD left me curious wanting to know more.
Very cool, well put together, and bonus points for using Twine! I really enjoyed the story!
Really enjoyed this. Managed to get the "correct" ending as well after a few play throughs. Loved the humour in this :)
Entertaining read, and I hit the correct ending on the first go :) Really enjoyed the writing style - had a Douglas Adams vibe to it.
Innovation++
Mood++
Well done.
Of course I closed email, I'm in IT! Okay, on second run I didn't, but it led me to all kinds of multi-dimensional issues...
A bit short.
But the meta angle was fun!
Short but intense. Nice story !
First Twine game I've played. It's a nice concept... good writing, somewhat serendipitous storylines! :)
It feels like I'm playing a game of the it crowd, but actually on task and spacey. Good job.