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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Yasmeen's comment | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| May 6 10:35:41 | Ice Break Delivery | ♥ 1 | Love the cute low-poly penguins and relaxing music! And really like the idea of having to dash past a horde of hungry penguins. The instructions are good for the jam, but afterward it could be helpful to add a basic in-game tutorial since it took me a couple of tries to figure it out. Nice job! | |
| May 6 10:53:15 | 17m 34s | Heart-Warming Deliveries | ♥ 1 | Incredibly polished art and game overall! Fantastic job! For the UI I would sometimes get confused, for example I would see the down arrow and press down to drop something off when I should have actually pressed right - maybe try using different symbols for the pick-up/drop-off? |
| May 6 11:14:07 | 20m 52s | Burger Galactic | ♥ 1 | Good job, really unique idea! Did not expect to see a delivery game with Mario Galaxy-style physics. The worldbuilding in the description about the vegan burgers made me chuckle. For next steps it could it be fun to add elements such as a limit on the number of burgers or a time limit, and add challenges like moving planets or black holes that suck up burgers. |
| May 6 11:58:46 | 44m 39s | Rogue, fluff & nuts | ♥ 1 | Fun! Gives me old-school Zelda vibes. Like the segments where you enter trees. Can be a bit tiring to keep pressing the same key to move in a direction - maybe allow the player to hold the key to move in that direction? Good job with your game! |
| May 6 12:34:07 | 35m 21s | A Day In The Life of a Stork | ♥ 1 | Nice, an easy to understand and fun game! The art has a lot of personality. Some funny sound effects and music would be a good addition in the future. |
| May 6 12:45:44 | 11m 37s | Ricardo's Busy Day | ♥ 1 | Nice! The music helped me get into the rhythm. Maybe could try highlighting the upcoming road intersection, to make it easier for the player to react? |
| May 6 12:59:25 | 13m 41s | Salty Coins | ♥ 2 | Absolutely love the look of the map! And the atmosphere created by the haunting music. |
| May 6 13:17:54 | 18m 29s | Involuntary Nannies | ♥ 2 | Very impressive that you were able to add a cutscene and flesh out the story so much! The game is quite challenging - maybe add a super-easy mode/ mode with infinite lives where players can practice? |
| May 6 13:56:33 | 38m 39s | Isles Express | ♥ 1 | Nice! I really appreciated the coherence in the presentation in terms of the retro graphics and audio. The controls are a bit unintuitive for the first time player (or maybe just me I don't know too much about boats XD), so I think a practice mode or tutorial would be helpful. |
| May 6 15:27:55 | 1h 31m | Jitto | ♥ 0 | Fun game, simple yet engaging! I liked the art style and enjoyed the challenge of controlling 2 players at once. It would be nice to add some music during the gameplay, similar to the great music from the title screen. |
| May 6 15:55:38 | 27m 43s | All About That Buzz | ♥ 1 | Great work, very impressive considering you made this alone! I liked the idle animation of the bee, and the instructions on the carpet in the intro area were a smart idea. With the combat it would be nice in the future to add some other options other than running away while the auto-shoot activates. For example maybe you have a bar you can fill that when activated gives you temporary invincibility? But overall amazing effort! |