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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | David Greene's comment | |
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| Apr 21 02:22:49 | DOC+ORS | ♥ 1 | Great graphics! I had some issues controlling the guys, but I mostly got it. Really great menu! | |
| Apr 21 02:29:19 | 6m 30s | Oh Crap! | ♥ 0 | I feel like this 3-in-1 game really misses the mark on the whole. On one hand, it's an interesting to mix it up, but on the other I don't feel engaged at all. I'd rather see any one of those mini games opened up and flushed out instead of all 3. |
| Apr 21 12:46:52 | 10h 17m | The Machine at the Center of the Earth | ♥ 0 | Very nice job, I like your list of post-submission goals. It's not that you didn't think of it - we just have a time limit is all :) I seemed to do very poorly and the machine died way too fast... I guess it's a matter of remembering which light is which. Also, as you mentioned, having some sort of level progression or end is good. |
| Apr 21 20:47:04 | 8h 00m | Fading Ember | ♥ 2 | Very hard game, but really well done. Some of the transitions need work (like when you respawn, for example). But really, I'm nitpicking. GJ! |
| Apr 22 16:48:20 | 20h 01m | STRAND·ED | ♥ 1 | Wow that's hard! I'm really impressed at the unique gameplay here - You should consider polishing it up some and shipping it. |
| Apr 22 16:52:25 | 4m 05s | Crates N' Gates | ♥ 1 | Really solid submission. If I had a desire, it would be that I didn't have to use the same key to open and pick up. Maybe just hold to open and run over to pick up? It just felt a little awkward. |
| Apr 22 18:55:42 | 2h 03m | Remnants | ♥ 2 | While I had absolutely zero idea of what I was doing, I really liked it! I felt like I was doing something at least, but I have no idea why I died. The concept of the citizen reserve was lost on me so maybe a better tutorial or something (btw, I'm totally guilty of this too!) Hint: make sure you add sound. My first few game jams I'd leave sound to the absolute last minute and it was always a big turnoff for folks. Even basic sounds make all the difference. If you did have sound, then it wasn't working in HTML5. |
| Apr 22 20:06:51 | 1h 11m | Don't Go Grandpa | ♥ 0 | Amazing entry! Just like everyone else has said, this is a great game. As it's topical, I highly encourage you guys to make this playable on a phone -- I'm sure you won't be disappointed. Make sure to post back if/when you publish a final copy. |
| Apr 23 20:25:07 | 24h 18m | Heart of the World Tree | ♥ 1 | I agree with some of the other commenters - the game needs some "more" to be more fun. Just blocking balls doesn't feel that fun. I'd love to have a way to remove the extra balls that come, maybe creating a temporary spike on the tree? I dunno, but it just needs "more". Overall, great submission! Good sound with good (and simple) graphics. |
| Apr 24 15:55:33 | 19h 30m | Savior | ♥ 1 | Came from reddit (nice job with the animated gif, always a good way to get people to play). Like the other commenters have said, great job - good submission! I really enjoyed playing! |
| Apr 25 17:47:51 | 25h 52m | Cthulhu: The Cult Must Not Die | ♥ 3 | I agree with the many other comments. With some combat polish, I think this could be a lot better. Overall, it's amazing graphics and sound for a weekend jam. |
| Apr 28 23:58:07 | 78h 10m | Touch it! Do it! | ♥ 1 | I noticed by hitting 'e' I killed myself. What's up with that? |
| May 1 01:52:01 | 49h 53m | D'ough | ♥ 0 | I really love the idea! Great theme music and art... I, like the others, had a hard time doing stuff in the game and gave up. Rock on guys, great work nonetheless |
| May 9 12:58:28 | 203h 06m | Keep Hope Alive | ♥ 1 | I think this is a great game. It's probably a little too hard to play at first, but with some practice I bet it's a lot easier. For a jam, I think it's great. I love the unique take on the theme -- it's quite refreshing! |