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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | PeteGrammarman's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 25 01:41:00 | Aberrant | Wow that was really spooky for such a simple game. Good job! I wasn't entirely clear on what the guards could see or when they would move, but I guess that just made it more tense. | |
| Aug 25 01:43:00 | 2m 00s | Monster In Heaven | I like the sound effects! |
| Aug 25 01:46:00 | 3m 00s | (You are the) monster gaiden | Wow this game is beautiful! Looks like all you needed was some more time to add features. |
| Aug 25 01:56:00 | 10m 00s | Manster Ltd | Worked for me. I'm a sucker for games that you can switch between two characters that have different abilities. This was really solid for your first game, just keep on doing this and you'll be making great work. |
| Aug 25 02:18:00 | 22m 00s | Mmmonster | Love it, so polished and the art is SO GOOD. Plus it's a fun game with a fun mechanic. |
| Aug 25 02:27:00 | 9m 00s | Me | Wow, beautiful painted artwork. The game itself is buggy and short but I imagine you spend a lot with the atmosphere and art. |
| Aug 25 02:31:00 | 4m 00s | People's Mandatory Video Entertainment | I liked that the birth was a different game from the rest, but then it crashed when I got to the butt sign. |
| Aug 25 02:35:00 | 4m 00s | Wolverados - The Good, The Bad and the Lupine! | Like just about everything about it. Like you said, if only there was more things to do. Great work though! |
| Aug 25 02:40:00 | 5m 00s | Groop | I like the music and overall polish and consistency to the art. Try adding feedback to when he gets hit though, other than a sound effect. Keep up the good work! |
| Aug 25 02:48:00 | 8m 00s | Just Another Mortar Monday | I like the design of the monster. Also the main mechanic is very fun and it is satisfying to smash guys with their own mortars. If this was polished up and made a bit faster, with different modes or upgrades(I'm sure you've thought of this) it would work well on mobile. Keep up the good work! |
| Aug 26 22:14:00 | 43h 26m | Mechacorico | I really liked this! The idea of having all these little chicken minions and using them as an attack resource was really great. I also enjoyed the little story cards at the beginning, it was a nice touch. Great job! |
| Aug 26 22:58:00 | 44m 00s | Good Luck Gardener | Loved the mystery of it all. The graphics were lovely and I was captivated from the start. Didn't get any sort of ending(and I tried!) but that's okay. |
| Aug 26 23:07:00 | 9m 00s | Cleanup of the Black Lagoon | Wow, the mechanic of having the trash pile at the bottom is what makes this game really great. Just plowing through the floor mashing L was very satisfying. Great job! Nice music too! |
| Aug 26 23:18:00 | 11m 00s | Welcome to Cronenburg | Loved it! The concept is hilarious and your Cronenbergs were gross. Keep it up! |
| Aug 26 23:24:00 | 6m 00s | KaijuKrush | I liked the graphics and music! The overall mechanic of deciding when to use your special attack wasn't interesting to me until the last level, when it became challenging. Overall very nice polished game! |
| Aug 26 23:48:00 | 24m 00s | Justice Five | I'm impressed that you were able to make an all boss fight game with a ton of original songs! Great concept too! The first boss was WAY too hard and the rest were slightly easier but overall I had fun. Thanks! |
| Aug 26 23:58:00 | 10m 00s | Saturday Morning Destruction | Loved the art and idea! Your use of the theme was great and so was the music. |
| Aug 27 01:33:00 | 1h 35m | Sunday Killjoy | I liked it, just needs more time of course! I really enjoyed how consistent the art was. |
| Aug 27 01:40:00 | 7m 00s | Chicken Girl in Toyhouse! | I loved the dynamic music! The art was adorable and polished. The code could still use some time, and I wasn't exactly sure how the red circles turned on/off. I guess you are scaring the green boxes? Either way, it looked great and the concept could be expanded upon. Great work! |
| Aug 27 01:46:00 | 6m 00s | Tentacle Blockade | Man smashing boats into each other is fun! I liked that you labeled what the ships were carrying, a great way to add some humor. The map aesthetic was clever and looked cool. Add some screen shake and ship crashing sounds and it would be even more fun. |
| Sep 6 04:51:00 | 243h 05m | The Vacuum of Space | I really like this idea! Good work! |
| Sep 6 04:55:00 | 4m 00s | I'm a Monster Rawr! | Adorable, lovely art. And the sound at the beginning was cute too. As a game its pretty simple/easy, but maybe tweaking the motion and adding powerups could make it into a fuller idea. |
| Sep 6 05:03:00 | 8m 00s | People Muncher | I loved that feeding the fish monster actually simulated feeding a pet goldfish, that is amazing. The bored screams were a funny touch as well. |
| Sep 6 05:13:00 | 10m 00s | YOU MONSTER!! | Nice little narrative game here! The text shaking was a nice touch and the writing itself was very well done and believable. Great job! |
| Sep 6 05:15:00 | 2m 00s | Gorgezilla | I love the animation/movement of Gorgezilla, very hilarious. |
| Sep 6 05:19:00 | 4m 00s | Kraken Skulls | If the tentacles could high-five each other this would have been THE perfect game. |
| Sep 6 05:24:00 | 5m 00s | Meet the Monsta | Amazing presentation! I dunno why more games don't use this sort of look but you pulled it off perfectly. As a game, it could use a little tweaking, no real strategy can be applied to winning. The method of movement was very innovative and matched how the character would walk and that is always a great thing to have in a game. |
| Sep 6 05:29:00 | 5m 00s | It's Sunday | Great slap and death animations! Was legitimately feeling rage at the main character too! |
| Sep 6 05:55:00 | 26m 00s | The Dictator Simulator | It was funny enough, basically a pick-the-right-answer game. Do they ever start booing? That would have been good to have to break up all the cricket cheering I was getting. |
| Sep 13 01:28:00 | 163h 33m | The Last Witch | Really great music and gameplay. I was confused on what was happening a lot, but the art is pretty charming. It works as a very difficult single player game! |
| Sep 13 01:41:00 | 13m 00s | D÷V÷S÷ON | Really good twist on the katamari mechanic. Division helps you cover more ground but leaves you vulnerable. I dunno if getting game over after losing a tiny piece was intentional, but I didn't like that aspect. Overall great idea! |
| Sep 13 01:45:00 | 4m 00s | The one who lurks in the dark | Really like the design of the monster, he is adorable. Don't like the tank controls. Giving a more fluid control scheme and making it more clear I was actually eating people would make it a lot better. Keep up the good work! |
| Sep 13 01:54:00 | 9m 00s | Closet Monster | Didn't understand what the sounds were supposed to be or what they meant. The hand drawn art was very nice, and it's what pulled me into the game. The spacebar as a control is fine, but moving that slow, especially when nothing happens on the first screen, is very frustrating. |
| Sep 13 02:03:00 | 9m 00s | Drack's Mansion | Very nice pixel work. The sound effects got kind of annoying after a while. The mixture of guys who shoot magic back at you and guys resistance to melee was a very good mixture of mechanics. Good work! |
| Sep 15 00:23:00 | 46h 20m | Almost Heroic | Wow, really good overall! I saw the ending coming (well most of it) but the story was still very compelling. I liked the color scheme and music as well. The main mechanic stayed around just long enough to keep from getting stale and it was surprising/innovative at the start. Great job! |