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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Jezzamon's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 30 05:43:00 | Dinosawr Roflstomp | Cute... except for the blood. Poor caveguys :( | |
| Aug 30 05:53:00 | 10m 00s | In the name of science! | Not a bad game, but not incredibly interesting. There wasn't anything particularly new about this game to distinguish from other similar ones. <br/> <br/>The lack of sound did hurt this a lot though. Evening having simple sound effects makes a big difference. Try using something like sxfr (there are some links on the tools page) or searching freesound for some sound effects. <br/> <br/>Good job in making a completed game though! |
| Aug 30 22:04:00 | 16h 11m | Bombercat | The web link seems a little broken? At least for me, it was a download link instead. You might need to move the file into a public dropbox folder, in which case it should open in the browser window. <br/> <br/>Regarding the game: <br/>You really need to include some sounds! Basic sound effects make a big difference. Try using something like sxfr, you can create good little ones without much effort. Otherwise the game felt a little empty to me. If you can make any music, that helps a lot too. |
| Aug 30 22:11:00 | 7m 00s | Pigeon Postal | Cute :) <br/> <br/>I think the movement of the bird would be nicer if it was a little slower, I found it hard to control. <br/> <br/>Unfortunately you missed the theme on this one. Also, it would be good to have some instructions in the game. Maybe just letting me know that I need to drop packages in coloured doors, and if I leave them behind I can't advance. You probably worth editing the description on this page at least. <br/> <br/>I had fun playing this one :) |
| Aug 30 22:20:00 | 9m 00s | I like brain | Some Ludum Dare tips: <br/>- Generally people label their games Windows if that's what computer they work on. <br/>- You forgot to upload the game's source code! Uploading the source is a requirement of the Compo. If you don't want to, you can switch to Jam. It's not too hard, you can just grab everything and chuck it in a .zip file. <br/>- Use something like dropbox instead of MediaFire to upload your game on. I don't want to have to click through all those ads. <br/>- Try to reduce the download size. Surely RPGMaker can compress games a little bit? Otherwise put the game in a .zip file. <br/> <br/>I didn't play this game because the download size was too large. |
| Aug 30 22:56:00 | 36m 00s | a Spirit Awakening | Fun! I played it through all the way! <br/> <br/>Some issues were: <br/>There were a few times where I just had to wait for my spirit meter to go back up, which was pretty boring. I couldn't leave the game idle and do something else either thanks to flixel's auto-pause feature. :( <br/> <br/>There were also a few where I just landed on an enemy without being able to see that they were there, which isn't very good as far as level design goes. I guess I'm meant to drop a bear down first? <br/> <br/>What parts of the game did you make? The music and graphics were really good, so nice job if you made them! <br/> <br/>I felt the theme was a little lacking... was the idea that the last spirit animal was meant to be the reference to the theme? I think games that use the theme the best are ones where the theme impacts the entire game, whereas this game could be for any theme really. <br/> <br/>Anyway, good game! |
| Aug 30 23:04:00 | 8m 00s | We Missed You! | AWESOME! You really nailed this! I've got no suggestions to make. Also the audio was VERY listenable :P |
| Aug 31 21:49:00 | 22h 45m | A Heart between Parts | Looks nice :) <br/>I wished it was longer though. I guess that's partly because the gif someone posted on twitter about this game they gave away most of the puzzles. Oh well. |
| Aug 31 22:02:00 | 13m 00s | APT - Advanced Persistent Tabby | Wall jumping is a little off. I think it would've worked better if you had to press the jump key to jump each time. <br/> <br/>It's a shame there wasn't really anything new about this as a platformer though. <br/> <br/>Still, good job in making a game that felt relatively complete |
| Aug 31 22:03:00 | 1m 00s | Phylactery | Windows build? I run chrome so I can't play the web one. |
| Sep 2 00:12:00 | 26h 09m | Blenderman | Looks like you couldn't quite finish it. I couldn't really tell what the actual concept behind the game was. Also, I had to go to this page and read the comments to figure out that I could push the red button, because the hit box is fairly off. <br/> <br/>Music and graphics are great though! |
| Sep 2 10:02:00 | 9h 50m | Moon Witch | Please label the post-jam game appropriate in the download link by calling it something like "Windows (Post-Jam) |
| Sep 5 01:44:00 | 63h 42m | Amebiasis | FYI you can just add the Android link with the other links :) <br/> <br/>I'm about to try it on Android, it's currently downloading... |
| Sep 7 22:27:00 | 68h 43m | Squid Pro Quo | Hm. My mouse disappears when I play this game, which makes it pretty difficult. |