Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD54 → Trapped in the Infinite Script
By Kira_Platon, meowellyq, Polina_fl, dana.obodrana and zitronmommy
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 560 | 3.57 | 28 | |
| Fun | 984 | 2.84 | 28 | |
| Innovation | 887 | 2.94 | 27 | |
| Theme | 449 | 3.80 | 28 | |
| Graphics | 413 | 3.87 | 29 | |
| Audio | 380 | 3.50 | 29 | |
| Mood | 356 | 3.77 | 29 |
It is my opinion, but this game is mostly for girls that love anime characters seriously, that admire them, i dont think thats a good idea for a game, but the idea that mc is locked in a loop is very good you should go more with this
Pretty cool! It's kinda funny you always have the option to "Apologize". Would've been a lot better, if the menu buttons had box colliders.
Atmosphere is a bit depressing, but good on topic
@ynnon Thanks!!
I want a sequel to this game. When will the second part be released?
Not a bad scenario. The sound is well chosen. There are not enough options for the development of events. However, there is a good volume in jam conditions.
@roman-cujba we appreciate a lot your enthusiasm, hahaha. Thanks!
@fatemperor We ourselves would like to make more variability, but we just didn’t have time. Thank you very much for your comment !!
Good music!
Some impressive artwork and some nice mood/atmospheres with the audio and scenes. I think with some additional choices and maybe alternate consequences would of been nice. Was a cool visual novel, nice work!
I don't normally play/read those kind of graphic novels, but though it was fun to read through the end! Good job on your first game!
@soul-grinder Thanks a lot!
@christian-zommerfelds Happy to hear it was fun!
Interesting! This was a bit different from most of what I've seen in the jam, and that's always a good thing. I was a bit frustrated by the options sometimes--I would have liked to see something between "be a pushover" and "be extremely rude." But, I guess that's part of it, isn't it? We're limited by what the character would do, not by what we would choose to do in that situation.
A well-developed visual novel, I like the atmosphere in the air, somewhat reminiscent of my city.
Прикольная идея но от артстиля слишком воняет яоем однако это не минус)
Excellent artwork. The story and music is good as well.
The fears, emotions, anxieties, and phobias of the character are excellently conveyed. Good job on creating the game’s atmosphere and cool graphics.
Well-chosen sound effects that correctly switch according to what’s happening in the game. Great work!
And personally, I really love it when games break the fourth wall.
Hello from Doki-Doki, the easter egg in the game is noticed!
The game is interesting, it was quite nice to play it, keep working on it and everything will be cool
Very interesting graphic novel! I'm always a big fan of fourth-wall breaking. At first I was skeptical but then I got into it, I'd definitely read more of this. Thanks for making it, good work!
Interesting story, nice work! :)
Oh! old but gold graphic novel game! Interesting interactions with player
Finally got around to playing this! Very good work on the mood and conveying the anxiety. I replayed a couple of times and tried different options but things didn't seem to change so I hope I didn't miss anything. If not, some different outcomes would've been neat but maybe that would've gone against what you were trying to convey? Audio was good and suited the story/gameplay well. I'm assuming that's AI art, especially since the hands are so wonky, but it kind of fits the vibe and of course it allowed you to do more in little time. I'm assuming the foreground characters are your own art? Was interesting seeing Chou get more busted up every time… Nice work, just needs something a little extra I think!
@ava-skoog thank you for you comment. The characters Chou and woman with kid were drawn by a real person (drawing hands that are not hidden by clothes is a little hard and this is why they are a little bit messy + I think the palms themselves turned out well). The backgrounds were real photo but filtered by AI because there was simply not enough time to make good and diverse backgrounds.
Yes, the hands on the foreground characters looked great, just to be clear 😅 Creative use of AI on the backgrounds, I especially liked the car with the flowers.