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B-Rush Deliveries
By bashem
View on ldjam.com
| Category | Rank | Score | Count |
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| Overall | 734 | 3.44 | 20 | |
| Fun | 958 | 3.00 | 20 | |
| Innovation | 606 | 3.31 | 21 | |
| Theme | 832 | 3.63 | 21 | |
| Graphics | 176 | 4.31 | 21 | |
| Audio | 668 | 2.86 | 20 | |
| Humor | 610 | 3.02 | 20 | |
| Mood | 612 | 3.50 | 20 | |
Comments
noobdude
2023-05-02 15:28
I tried doing my best as an artist, alas im a programmer and suck at it, the game has potential however i felt like the orders were going away faster than i could do stuff, the orders should be paused (in my opinion) when you are crafting stuff or using other menus.
The art is really beautiful and there's definitely potential here, well done!
obe-dot
2023-05-02 19:29
This is a really good looking game!
merrow
2023-05-02 19:33
Beatiful art, but i didn´t get the job done. There is a sound bug in the Invest window. But i see a lot of potenzial in it. Well done.
bashem
2023-05-02 22:21
@noobdude @merrow and everyone else: Thanks for your feedbacks! We've uploaded a new version with bugfixes and improved dynamics, and we'll keep tweaking the gameplay in the next days. Hope you'll enjoy!
obe-dot
2023-05-02 23:12
Wow this is actually amazing
milq
2023-05-03 15:57
The graphics seem fantastic to me, I miss a background music that gives me atmosphere because it would fit in fantastically, but otherwise, I find the game very fun! Congrats!
I looooove the art direction you took + the animations are so cute! I had a problem where the crafting noise played non-stop after I made my first item. I really enjoyed it overall!
jpbaraky
2023-05-03 23:37
I didn't know how to make green paint :( so I lose. very nice concept could be expanded into something real nice. some stressful craft delivery game. Loved the art
bashem
2023-05-04 00:06
Thanks everyone for your kind feedbacks!
@milq We're definitely planning to add music! @emmelinee Thanks for reporting the bug. We were aware of it, we already tried to quickly patch it but I guess it still pops out every now and then. We'll try again tomorrow! @jpbaraky Yeah we were somehow conflicted about the fact that players would've needed some knowledge in color theory but we eventually decided to still go that way while on average giving players some more time than we initially planned. Don't give up and try again!
smoky01
2023-05-04 07:26
Good and interesting idea game
I really like the art of this one, good job!
ntimi
2023-05-04 07:44
Really cool art. The crafting idea is nice! And there's a lot going on, with all those different crafting materials, a lot, all these different reactions for lost orders, the details in the room. Seems like a lot of work went into this. :) I was just too dumb to craft all the items in time, most of my deliveries failed. But I'll try again. This business is going to be successful one day.
Very good graphics and pretty interesting idea!
I feel like there's a sort of tension between the 'experiment / figure things out' and 'go as fast as you can' aspects of the game. Maybe having a much longer timer but only on items you haven't 'solved' yet would sort of help? So you would alternate between quickly churning out items you already know and taking a bit longer to figure out the items you don't.
yumykon
2023-05-04 14:29
Great job on the game! I loved the artwork, it's really well done. The concept and gameplay are also really enjoyable, especially the management aspect and the ability to choose the ingredients that make the most sense. The only thing I missed was some background music to bring more life to the environment, but overall you did a fantastic job! Congratulations(⌒▽⌒)☆
bashem
2023-05-09 09:32
Thanks everyone for the feedbacks! @ntimi @lucdeligne We've uploaded a new version with longer timers and with helpers to whom the player can delegate orders related to items which have previously been successfully built by the player himself. Also there's now an instruction book which explains how to build each item/produce each color! @yumykon We just put some basic background music on, but we should definitely compose something ourselves as soon as we'll get enough time!
Neat idea overall, however I don't get the logics sometimes. Still, it's getting quite involving when you work out the routine. Have to check post-jam. Nice job!
Great game! I really liked the graphics and the overall idea. I also liked buying things to make the crafts easier, like "sugar" or the coffe. But I didn't really get how the minions were supposed to work... The one I had just kept walking around the office interacting with random stations haha.
Maybe I should play it more, but I felt that after 3 or 4 orders, I just had a lot of them waiting and I couldn't keep up. Maybe that wouldn't have been a problem if I knew how to order the minion around haha. Oh, and also, I feel like time should freeze when you're reading the instruction book!
Those are just suggestions, but it is still a very solid and amazing looking entry. Good job!