elephantlung 2022-10-05 02:06
Fun lil game, a bit janky with the jumping but pretty good work for your first!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD51 → Picking apples
By siria-games
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 1185 | 2.68 | 18 | |
| Fun | 1026 | 2.84 | 18 | |
| Innovation | 1061 | 2.70 | 17 | |
| Theme | 1190 | 2.40 | 17 | |
| Graphics | 978 | 2.90 | 18 | |
| Audio | 685 | 2.85 | 16 | |
| Humor | 604 | 2.80 | 17 | |
| Mood | 1020 | 2.87 | 18 |
Fun lil game, a bit janky with the jumping but pretty good work for your first!
@elephantlung Thank you very much, yes the jump animation was not executed and ended up with this error
Hey, @siria-games , nice game! I'll give the feedback in portuguese, because I know that's your main language, ok?
Opa! Guilherme da Uniday aqui e eu não poderia deixar de ver e prestigiar seu game, meu caro! Vi lá no discord e fiquei muito feliz em saber que você conseguiu desenvolver seu game e que os meus tutoriais te ajudaram de alguma forma a realizar esse objetivo épico! Vou ser sincero com você: Participar de uma game jam, principalmente da Ludum Dare, que é uma das maioires jams de todas, é algo incrível e que faz muita diferença em sua jornada da criação de Games, mesmo que você não perceba isso agora. Pois vai colocar sua mente no lugar certo para fazer jogos de maneira ágil e eficaz.
A propósito, ficou muito legal seu game, meus parabéns!
E lembre-se: você não precisa parar ele por aí... é sempre bom continuar desenvolvendo e trazendo updates pós jam! :)
@unidaystudio Opa Guilherme, eu sei inglês sim rsrs... Muito obrigado pelo seu feedback, sim cara foi por sua causa que eu entrei nesse mundo e consegui fazer o que fiz, irei traser muitos update ainda, mas muito obrogado msm por ter dado atenção pra mim :v: ! :)
Hey mate! Congratz of finishing the project :) Good luck in the next ld!
@sparklingsushi thank you so much
Nice entry, was fun to play!
@quoc thx
Nice Work!
Hey, I liked your entry! I feel like you had a clear vision for the game and I think you can be very proud of how it turned out. Obviously there is still some stuff missing and lacking but fro mwhat I can tell, I think giving you only a few things to explore will help ypu out the most. Firstly, I would advise you to work on mechanics first and then on graphics. The game's graphics are already up to the standard set for a game jam and investing too much time there will keep you from developing the core mechanics.
Secondly, I think easier camera controls, especially including a vertical axis, which would also help with the jump feeling better, could already make a big difference, along with maybe slightly more deliberate implementation of the theme.
Overall: Good work and I hope to see more from you next Ludum Dare!
You've got the basics down! Keep it up!
Not bad for your first game. Even if it doesn't fit the theme. Good luck in next jams!
Awesome work for a first game! There is certainly some jank, but it's actually pretty fun to play as is!
your first game is a lot better than mine was so, congratulations. The camera movement and walking animation were super smooth too. Nice work!
@noirox Thanks for your feedback! Really what you said makes perfect sense, it's my first jam so I'll improve and use your tips!
@epeachyband Yes can't follow the theme unfortunately
@b3b0 Thank you very much !
@chispalbc Thank you very much :)
For your first game you did a decent job. Keep it up :)