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Home Alone

By renge

Percentile
CategoryRankScoreCountLD47Ever
Overall6222.30300.73.3
Fun5992.25303.16.5
Innovation6082.34304.09.3
Theme4493.273030.738.1
Graphics6022.05300.83.3
Audio4901.96281.86.8
Humor3812.233013.719.9
Mood5702.12280.62.8

Comments

gingerbill 2020-10-05 10:00 ♥ 2

Nice little find the thing game. Would have loved to have had more levels.

wakobu 2020-10-05 10:01 ♥ 1

Congratulations for making this game ! I could quickly finish it. The mechanics are easy to understand and the game is soft to play. However, it lacks ambiance and consistency.

shan-hsgames 2020-10-05 16:29 ♥ 1

Gameplay is fun and smooth. I liked the style!

pastelgames 2020-10-05 16:32 ♥ 1

Oh this idea is actually so cool once you get the hang of it. i was like "oh how am i gonna get back there?" and then i realized that it loops back. if you expanded this and made some longer levels i think it would be super cool. definitely an amazing concept. i would say maybe not allow people to accidentally fall into the bear trap right at the start. otherwise, good stuff!

aaron-smith 2020-10-05 16:50 ♥ 1

the death art made me laugh so hard. It's so gruesome compared to the rest it really caught me off guard Congrats!

sirred 2020-10-05 18:25 ♥ 1

Interesting puzzle game. I got stuck on the second level cause I forgot I could jump. Also some weird collision on one of the ramps got me stuck walking so I had to jump out. Love the death drawing.

cameronotten 2020-10-06 14:16 ♥ 1

yeah biggest issue was the collision in some areas but def a fun concept

jonah 2020-10-06 14:17 ♥ 1

nice looping!

it really works.

cool walking animation.

nice job!

nekorio 2020-10-06 14:37 ♥ 1

Good idea for looping puzzle game !

eugenik 2020-10-07 02:36 ♥ 1

I gotta say the art style is awsome!

trypants 2020-10-07 03:31 ♥ 1

Nice looping! Would love a bit more polishing on the colliders. Got stuck often. Congrats for submitting a game!

marc-antoine-girard 2020-10-07 03:37 ♥ 1

It's a nice concept. The collision are a bit clumsy and the collision checks are weirdly slow

mg-beatz 2020-10-07 23:32 ♥ 1

i was watching the live recording when you were making this game , it was awesome , i like the animation

gilad-bar-ilan 2020-10-08 13:47 ♥ 1

Nice graphics! Looks like painting going over there!

ericbolseiro 2020-10-08 17:29 ♥ 1

Nice Work to be made alone!

croxel-studios 2020-10-08 17:38 ♥ 1

Nice looping mechanic. I also like the handmade art :)

Cool entry!

ms-annotation-x 2020-10-10 15:40 ♥ 1

**Nice entry!**

**Here is my feedback:**

**What I liked?** - I liked player's movements animation (It feels off, but it made me laugh) - I liked SFX. - I enjoyed the mechanics and the gameplay a bit.

**What I disliked?** - Didn't like the graphics. - The player takes a bit long time on the jump. - The white boxes have low-quality pixels.

**To Fix:** - Level 1 when you got destroyed by the spike, the camera kind of snaps there. - Can't walk here from the beginning. (I need to jump) [1] - The collider on this white box, is kind of big. (Level 2) [2] - Can't walk here, and can't walk and jump at the same time. [3]

**Suggestions:** - I think no need for rest button, you can make it "R" to restart, and it will do the job. - Add a main menu. - Maybe, make the door key moving up and down when you find it, for some game juice. - Draw on a small canvas size when you draw pixel art for now. - Maybe, add jumping/walking SFX. - Maybe, add jumping animation.

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Sorry for the critical feedback!

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**Endnotes:**

[1]

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[2]

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[3]

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guimoliveira 2020-10-21 23:05 ♥ 0

Nice game! :)