gingerbill 2020-10-05 10:00
Nice little find the thing game. Would have loved to have had more levels.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD47 → Home Alone
By renge
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 622 | 2.30 | 30 | |
| Fun | 599 | 2.25 | 30 | |
| Innovation | 608 | 2.33 | 30 | |
| Theme | 449 | 3.26 | 30 | |
| Graphics | 602 | 2.05 | 30 | |
| Audio | 490 | 1.96 | 28 | |
| Humor | 381 | 2.23 | 30 | |
| Mood | 570 | 2.11 | 28 |
Nice little find the thing game. Would have loved to have had more levels.
Congratulations for making this game ! I could quickly finish it. The mechanics are easy to understand and the game is soft to play. However, it lacks ambiance and consistency.
Gameplay is fun and smooth. I liked the style!
Oh this idea is actually so cool once you get the hang of it. i was like "oh how am i gonna get back there?" and then i realized that it loops back. if you expanded this and made some longer levels i think it would be super cool. definitely an amazing concept. i would say maybe not allow people to accidentally fall into the bear trap right at the start. otherwise, good stuff!
the death art made me laugh so hard. It's so gruesome compared to the rest it really caught me off guard Congrats!
Interesting puzzle game. I got stuck on the second level cause I forgot I could jump. Also some weird collision on one of the ramps got me stuck walking so I had to jump out. Love the death drawing.
yeah biggest issue was the collision in some areas but def a fun concept
nice looping!
it really works.
cool walking animation.
nice job!
Good idea for looping puzzle game !
I gotta say the art style is awsome!
Nice looping! Would love a bit more polishing on the colliders. Got stuck often. Congrats for submitting a game!
It's a nice concept. The collision are a bit clumsy and the collision checks are weirdly slow
i was watching the live recording when you were making this game , it was awesome , i like the animation
Nice graphics! Looks like painting going over there!
Nice Work to be made alone!
Nice looping mechanic. I also like the handmade art :)
Cool entry!
**Nice entry!**
**Here is my feedback:**
**What I liked?** - I liked player's movements animation (It feels off, but it made me laugh) - I liked SFX. - I enjoyed the mechanics and the gameplay a bit.
**What I disliked?** - Didn't like the graphics. - The player takes a bit long time on the jump. - The white boxes have low-quality pixels.
**To Fix:** - Level 1 when you got destroyed by the spike, the camera kind of snaps there. - Can't walk here from the beginning. (I need to jump) [1] - The collider on this white box, is kind of big. (Level 2) [2] - Can't walk here, and can't walk and jump at the same time. [3]
**Suggestions:** - I think no need for rest button, you can make it "R" to restart, and it will do the job. - Add a main menu. - Maybe, make the door key moving up and down when you find it, for some game juice. - Draw on a small canvas size when you draw pixel art for now. - Maybe, add jumping/walking SFX. - Maybe, add jumping animation.
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Sorry for the critical feedback!
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**Endnotes:**
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Nice game! :)