Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD47 → WhileFox
By snory
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 2.85 | 12 | ||
| Fun | 2.50 | 13 | ||
| Innovation | 3.59 | 13 | ||
| Theme | 3.54 | 13 | ||
| Graphics | 3.09 | 13 | ||
| Humor | 2.31 | 10 | ||
| Mood | 3.25 | 12 |
It's an interesting concept that can be worked on, but for now, it's really unintuitive to use as someone who doesn't know how the game works. The tutorial can also be worded better. A neat little package which shows promise overall!
I think i understand what you're going for, and it's a neat idea, but i could not figure out how to play the game. I could not understand what the symbols for each action were, and eventually couldnt click on the frog or the fox
Agree with @theaidency, it seems like there is something there but it is unintuitive and ultimately I could never reach the diamond. I like the concept and thing something like this would be a good educational style game for kids even. Having a tutorial was really great but I think it could have explained what to do better. Tag me in a comment if you make any updates, I'd love to give it another try
🦊 Cute graphics! 🐸
I have to agree with the previous comments, the games looks promising. The art is overall nice, and fox art is really nice. I just thought the audio was too loud. I also couldn't reach the diamond. I coldnt understand the command on the frog, the circle one (a egg?) At some point I guess I get the wrong command for the fox just after I reset the level, it appears the jump, move forward, and some other symbol, which I couldnt reproduce again.
Overall: The idea is nice, and adding some other levels could be a nice game to launch
@theaidency, @m7rk, @simplepotential, @thomas-volpato thank you for your feedback, I already did corrections so it would be more understandable. If you have a spare time, please feer free to try it and let me know if it is more clear.
The version I played is still confused. I'm blocked under the frog after the tutorial explanations. Anyway, I think I understand what you were trying to do, and it's a nice concept. Lot of possibilities on this base. You need to put strong feedbacks, for the activations and links of the loops betweens characters. It's a pity that you were not able to make a working level. But with improvements and more exploration on this base, I'm pretty sure you can make a good game!