ion-programming 2020-04-21 10:17
Really pretty game. well done
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD46 → a new life
By angela-he
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 3.93 | 10 | ||
| Fun | 3.00 | 10 | ||
| Innovation | 2.68 | 10 | ||
| Theme | 3.75 | 10 | ||
| Graphics | 4.87 | 10 | ||
| Humor | 3.18 | 10 | ||
| Mood | 4.37 | 10 |
Really pretty game. well done
I really love your style, and the little effect when moving the cursor around making the scenes feel more alive. There were some quirks with the text, one fell outside its bubble and I think I happened to click pass one or two messages. The amount of work and personality that has gone into the drawings and the story though! Phenomenal! For a while I was thinking that contrary to your previous entries that I've played, that this one was so happy and positive!
You should really upload a cover image and something here on the game page so people find it.
Quick reminder to get more players: Use a thumbnail for your game. Otherwise your game is presented with this grey box. Some great Games are not played because of a missing thumbnail ... You can still change it by editing your submission page :)
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Great work yet again~ Loved it. My eyes teared up yet again! why! ;_; I really like the story beats you hit, not that they are making me happy, but I really love how you present them, it's so good. Well done~! I do wonder if you plan at some point on working together, if you can do this alone, I am very curious what you can do with help~ Love your work, great entry~!
Amazing graphics and story! The characters felt really real. I also loved the little touch that you added to the diary after the completing the game with the true ending.
As always, so melancolic and poetic, so wonderful and finest drawings, wrapped around a well writed story. You definitely should rate and comments enough to get a final rate, if this game is not rated at the end it would be so sad, you deserve at least a place on graphics and mood…
Angela!! Thank you for making such a touching game jam entry again. T-T
I'm currently in a long distance relationship and the video call sequence hit me pretty hard. It's heartbreaking to think of anyone who can't be with their loved ones for one reason or another. Regarding the game's design, I really like that the chapter select system creates an accessible way to replay the story but you avoid the loop being "replay last chapter and try different choice" by making consequences span multiple chapters.
It's tricky to give constructive feedback since most of it was so well done, but in effort to do so I have a small nit-pick. Near the start of the game, because I chose to not look at my phone, I never got any notice about the virus before the decision for the wedding was presented. So it feels a bit unfair when you need to restart because you didn't have the knowledge required to make an informed decision (I guess it's a good representation of life haha). It would also be nice if the restart sequence sent you to the chapter select instead of the menu.
Overall, I'm blown away again by what you're capable of in such a short amount of time. Keep creating amazing things!
I'm trying to play, but I'm not able to interact. Is the screen cutting just above the buttons or something?
PS: Windows's version.
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Please let me know if I am missing something or if it is an error and fix the Windows version.
4.875 in Graphics and no placement? Oh no!