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Precarious

By norfma and SheeroChana

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall3453.6321
Fun6143.2121
Innovation2393.5021
Theme983.9721
Graphics1364.2321
Humor4183.0220
Mood3363.5721

Comments

dkmk100 2019-04-29 23:07

This is pretty cool! I did find love the way once you sell both your testicles the error message is "you don't have the balls to do that!" I do find it strange however that it still lets you sell sperm after selling your testicles

norfma 2019-04-30 06:38

@dkmk100 Hahaha, thanks for the feedback! The sperm donation without testicles is a detail that completely slipped my mind. xD

dannn 2019-04-30 07:12

Love the game! Art is amazing. Crashed twice here, though, not sure why.

yojammerjammer 2019-04-30 07:17

This is my favourite game I've played so far. Nice job, I just wish you gave more options for different resolutions, the screen cut off for me.

theitcrow 2019-04-30 07:44

Love the art. Fun, little concept. What instantly came up for me, is that the world is very static. Nothing but the player is moving. Maybe some particle effects in the background, easily makable in Unity and a few little Idle animations :) But very nice game, congratz!

norfma 2019-04-30 16:30

@dannn What OS/version of the game were you using ?

I haven't had any crashes while playing it on windows but didn't have the chance to try the builds on Linux or MacOs

dannn 2019-04-30 16:34

@norfma I'm on Win10 x64

fluffy-kaeloky 2019-04-30 17:22

The game looks really interesting, but I can only play it for a couple minutes before the game crashes. Here's a couple lines from the crash log.

``` Error assigning 2D texture to Invalid texture property '_CameraDepthTexture': Dimensions must match (Filename: Line: 42)

Crash!!! SymInit: Symbol-SearchPath: '.;C:\Users\-\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa55312.37207\Ludum44;C:\Users\-\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa55312.37207\Ludum44;C:\Windows;C:\Windows\system32;SRV*C:\websymbols*http://msdl.microsoft.com/download/symbols;', symOptions: 534, UserName: '-' OS-Version: 10.0.0

[Lots of DLLS]

[Repeating non valid addresses.]

0x00007FFEA15CAB0B (UnityPlayer) (function-name not available) 0x00007FFEA15CACDB (UnityPlayer) UnityMain ERROR: SymGetSymFromAddr64, GetLastError: 'Tentative d’accès à une adresse non valide.' (Address: 00007FF7DE971207) 0x00007FF7DE971207 (Precarious) (function-name not available)// << I can't have the function name because this is a release build. Try with a dev build to have debug symbols. 0x00007FFF1ADE7974 (KERNEL32) BaseThreadInitThunk 0x00007FFF1D3FA271 (ntdll) RtlUserThreadStart

========== END OF STACKTRACE =========== ```

siryakko 2019-04-30 20:08

Jeu déprimant mais idée géniale très proche d'un no time to relax mais en dépressif ^^. Très bonne entrée même si elle m'a planté dans les pattes :)

sheerochana 2019-04-30 22:50

Thanks everybody for your feedbacks !

@theitcrow & @dannn thanks for loving the art, it really means a lot to me to read that. <3

saering 2019-05-03 16:58

I liked the game, it was nice to play, easy to undertand and it has a great creepy atmosphere. It is in fact the best point in my opinion, the ambiance is nicely done, the art is great, and I think you should have accentuate it, by making the environment darker when the players gets ill, or maybe tinted in more green colors when he just gave an organ (RIP testicles), so it would have make the whole game more uncomfortable to play, and I think it would have been well. The music is great too.

Now the bad points :p First, it is too obvious that the outcome is going to be a death. I don't say you should change that, but after checking all the prices, I immediatly guessed I was going to die in about 2 weeks. Maybe raise up the rent each time, do not show all the possible sold organs (why would I sell my lungs when I still can live by seeling my "juice" ?), increase the bar prices, it's something that can happen in real life, so it can in your game too! Also the game lacks feedback in my opinion, it's not clear enough that the player is hungry, that he's getting worse and worse each day, and when I died I was wondering why. I knew I was about to, but I felt pretty good to stay alive, even with a low health, but alive.

And about some details, well first it's strange that I can still sell my sperm without testicles, maybe I'll question myself after that tho haha, and when you switch from a day to another using a black fade, wait for the screen to be completely dark before you change the statistics like the day counter or the hunger bar. And you could also change the player's sprite so it is possible to see when you can sell your hair or no !

Overall a cool entry, I enjoyed playing it ! :)

norfma 2019-05-03 22:14

@saering Thank you for such a complete feedback.

Sure there's a lot that can be improved on game jam projects in general. I especially agree on the lack of feedback which is why I added some particles effects to the gauges of the player in last minute.

I would have loved to have multiple sprites for the player being sick, or growing hair but there's only so much you can do in a week-end.

On a final note, everyone knows that pee is stored in the balls and you don't need those to produce semen. So I really don't see your point. Cheers :)

zubspace 2019-05-04 19:34

Very interesting game! First, I like the visual style. Very don't starve like. The music is a perfect match. I think you hit the theme in a very interesting way. It's disturbing, but in a good thought provoking way. Well done!

vladimir-smolin 2019-05-13 17:02

Nice visuals! Seems like you are Dont't Starve fans too)

jk5000 2019-05-13 17:45

Love the games art style and the chosen music fits the game really well. The gameplay idea is okay, but it fields like the idea is not really completed. Overall a fine LD game.