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Clean House

By nwdg

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness359
Humor3153.19
Mood4293.27
Innovation5203.00
Graphics5723.30
Overall6223.10
Fun6812.86
Theme8213.03

Comments

paulsinnett 2015-08-25 07:48

Great environment. I had some trouble with the mouse controls with the pointer leaving the screen and centring on the objects.

nwdg 2015-08-25 09:08

I see, colliders might be too small, thanks for the feedback!

gaga 2015-08-25 09:22

Loved it.
Really could have used a crosshair and I missed what 'she' said half of the time.

doggydog 2015-08-25 10:07

Really cool game. Simple but nic graphics.

mossy-frog 2015-08-25 10:34

Cool little house, its been said but I think a crosshair wouldhave helped as its hard to tell exactly where your pointing when trying to pick stuff up. Also the end scared me XD The laugh made me jump. Nice entry :D

nwdg 2015-08-25 13:26

Hey all, yes I see your point XD A crosshair would help A LOT, me myself have problems aiming too but totally slipped out of my mind. Sorry about that ^^

hive-interactive 2015-08-25 16:54

I couldn't understand my wife's requests... :D Cool concept though, enjoyed playing around with the dishes.

hellblazer 2015-08-27 03:41

Cool idea and twist. It could have used a few more steps with increasingly odd requests, but of course I understand the time constraints. Also, good pick with Saint-Saƫns for the music.

Good work!

chronodrax 2015-08-28 01:55

-> Web link does not work (allows to download the web player but not play it directly... what's the point then)
-> I like the idea of tidying open drawers by making them entirely disappear, it sure becomes less messy :>
-> Teacups in bedroom aren't considered as mess ? Couldn't pick'em'up
-> Does the character have back pain and can't pick up things on the ground ? (that hammer's telling me "pick me up pplllleeeaaaassseeee", but I can't aim it or click it)
-> No, since ther people did I'm not gonna mention the lack of crosshai... oh wait.
-> Also the mouse is not locked so when playing in windowed mode of with extended display on a 2nd screen it keeps losing focus
-> At the moment I saw that floating hammer near the cupboard I knew something was fishy.
-> Saw the stickmen-type instructions, did the opposite of what was requested. Best instructions ever! (really I thought that stickman standing up meant "turn this one" not "this one must point up")
-> GODDAMIT that ending! ...and I'm supposed to go to sleep now :c I'll keep the lights on, the voice I hear tells me it will be ok anyway.

Great idea and nice 3D graphics + voice acting for a 72h project :)

nwdg 2015-08-29 11:37

Thanks all! Wow Chronodrax that's a nice review, thank you! The drawer thing is actually a bug that I did't notice! Gonna fix it ASAP. THANK YOU ALL.

anaglyphcoding 2015-08-29 11:59

Don't understand what this had to do with the theme, but it was a nice fun game that reminded me of N64 games. The voice of the woman was very creepy.

I think I found a glitch, when I was in the dining room there was an open drawer with a hammer in it. When I closed it, the draw disappeared and the hammer stayed floating in the air. Weird.

gaspard_ 2015-08-29 12:08

Scary stuff, especially that classical music juxtaposed with cleaning up the house... And that ending...

Biruts 2015-09-02 01:08

Very nice project guys, i really love it, please check our game too and if you liked it give us a vote. Look for Road to hell and enjoy.

glerikud 2015-09-02 12:28

Great concept! It's one of my favourites on LD. For the future: The voice acting could use a better quality.

urbanhelsing 2015-09-02 17:34

Fun game, what to improve: movement is twerky and the end sound is to loud

crafteverywhere 2015-09-02 18:03

Very nice graphics. I like it.

demy 2015-09-02 19:13

Jump scares are bad =(
Well, I got into the atmosphere of the game but I would really like to get more plot here to get the more solid story.

puppetmaster 2015-09-02 19:16

Cool and creepy game! Loved to be a part of the murder! Nice entry!

tackorama 2015-09-02 19:45

Weird in a good way, but over a little too quick.

jacob123 2015-09-02 19:55

Nice, simple, relaxing game. Good job!

daukan 2015-09-02 19:55

The storyline is a bit short in my opinion. The door in the hallway that looks like a childs drawing I don't get. Why isn't it the same design as the other doors? However the mood is good. It all feels creepy.

drzanuff 2015-09-03 13:25

Remenbers me playing Elder Scrolls! Good game!

gabrielesani 2015-09-03 16:05

Great game and with a good twist! Keep on going!