ioand 2014-12-08 19:34
I'm not really sure if the human models are made by you in only 48h... You're 11 after all
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD31 → T.E.G.O.O.S.
By tosic
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Humor | 376 | 2.76 | ||
| Fun | 784 | 2.85 | ||
| Audio | 903 | 1.80 | ||
| Mood | 964 | 2.42 | ||
| Graphics | 1079 | 2.19 | ||
| Overall | 1080 | 2.58 | ||
| Innovation | 1093 | 2.20 | ||
| Theme | 1202 | 1.92 | ||
| Coolness | 1500 | 46 |
I'm not really sure if the human models are made by you in only 48h... You're 11 after all
So yeah, you should've put it in the jam category and opt-out the graphics category, since those models are not made by you: just compare them with the trees and ultra-low-poly level design. It's a weird, interesting game...
Uh... models are made in MakeHuman - people never said that's not OK - please rate the graphics if you haven't because I made the models.
And please, tell me the fact you thought human models aren't mine have not affected your ratings on other categories.
Good job.
Weird game, but interesting.
Next time, you should let the player restart at the level where he died, not at the complete beginning. (Not sure if you did at later leves, did not progress past the the running sequence.) The intro gets a little old after the fifth time.
I don't think this constitutes as entire screen. Glad to see some 11 year olds are doing something productive with their youth. Keep it up man!
Thx guys!
:D
First of all, let me say I'm impressed that you made a game like this at only eleven! Making a 48 hour game is a challenge for anyone! That said, I can't really say the end result was particularly good...
Just using the letters of the theme seems a bit like cheating, and some stuff like the footstep sound were kinda painful. The models are pretty basic, but I think in future you could experiment with using this to your advantage. For example, some of the textures on the ground and the trees were really unpleasant to look at, but if you swapped this for a virtual theme I think it could look a lot better with very little extra work. There were a few bugs I noticed, like immediately getting a game over if you ran out of bullets (even when the last bullet is on screen), and the count for the number of cores destroyed not resetting on game over (so after destroying three cores and running out of bullets, I only needed to destroy one on my next try).
Despite my issues with the game, I have to say the strange combination of different models, and some bizare whispered sound effects made the game feel really sureal, and I definitely rated the innovation and mood higher because of it!
Enjoyed.
Weird and trashy adventure.
Thumbs up
Good start.
Damn that game was weird but it was nice.
Your game making skills are definitely improving. Keep going!
The first place reminded me LA NOIRE, the corridor reminded me of Call of Duty, collecting farmers reminded me of MMORPG, the last room looks like Quake and all visual ambience is under acid haha.
Side of the sound,it's not stupid to use voice synthesizers, however for footsteps it's better to have nothing more than a heavy thing (unless it is wanted).
The game is fun, especially sequence with a cop chasing me, few times I flew a hudred meters awaay. Didn't finish though
Haha I loved the story at the beginning, I don't know why you teleport somewhere else after that though. I wish when restarting you would just restart from the level. Another thing which might be nice to add is an indicator of how close they are to chasing you, it doesn't really make sense to look behind yourself. Awesome job in getting this done in such a short time!
nice work