crowbeak 2014-08-25 04:21
If Dropbox is really the only way you have to distribute this, you should be able to just put the file(s) in your public folder, unzipped, and link to it so people can play without having to download anything.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD30 → Hers and His
By dadman
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 64 | ||
| Humor | 122 | 3.27 | ||
| Mood | 568 | 2.97 | ||
| Overall | 586 | 3.18 | ||
| Fun | 645 | 2.94 | ||
| Theme | 958 | 2.58 | ||
| Innovation | 1039 | 2.41 | ||
| Graphics | 1194 | 1.68 |
If Dropbox is really the only way you have to distribute this, you should be able to just put the file(s) in your public folder, unzipped, and link to it so people can play without having to download anything.
Even though it does not really connects to the theme in my opinion, it is as enjoyable as it is weird. Totally my kind of thing!
The more 'connected worlds' part of it was a bit far fetched and loopy. I can see what you mean when you said you got off track. It felt like a very unusual exploration of odd thoughts.
What if you did that thing that popped into your head randomly? Few people would explore that aspect of multiple choice type games because it often ends suddenly exactly how you'd expect.
All in all this set of stories was really interesting, I did get the social commentary feeling from it as well as many other odd and interesting themes which I thoroughly enjoyed exploring.
Great work!
Woah, some of that is disturbingly random. Cool idea though and some good writing.
Dat ending :D
gj
Got that frozen fish and slapped 'em. One of the best decision I've ever made in a game.
Interesting little Twine.
Nice with that many choices...
Got to go clubbing in an infinite loop :D Seriously, love the concept, really nice idea. Is a bit off track from the overall theme but is fun otherwise. Sure i'll end up spending more time reading though the other branches.
Hmm, this is a very interresting and unusual story. I liked it. But it rather feels a bit linear. Although there are lots of different endings, most of them feel incomplete. Fighting the rabit-man was really fun, however :)
Part interesting, part hilarious, nice job!
Good job on these. A lot of effort to come up with the storys
The only problem with this "game" was that i had to zoom way in. its kind of hard to read white on black (however i code that way), especially when i review LD games before sleep.
So, bigger text with inverse colors would be nice.
The game is good! its an interactive book, like the RPG books i used to "read" when i was a kid. Nice job :)
Dem Endings...
Wow, this is sooo big. I mean wow! I went clubbing and slapped people with a fish, and tried out doing the story in sync with the male/female versions to see the variations.
Then I (luckily) found the part where they meet themselves and the rabbit, and wow! The story just kept going! I really liked the idea of a synced him/her, and them being out and exploring. The reset-universes idea was pretty neat, too. (But as a side-note: hey, when a supernova bursts, planets don't just fly out of it immediately ^^)
I most liked the very-far happy-ending with the resonating thems feeling their presence.
All in all, am amazingly huge piece of work! Especially for 48 hours! Some of it a maybe bit far-fetched, some of it genius, and all maybe a tad unorded, making it hard to follow a central storyline. But overall, a great adventure I enjoyed immensely!
My only complaint is that it could really have done with a spell-check. Replayability very high :)