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Facts of Life

By ammaralsharekh

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Mood533.70
Audio1263.35
Theme2082.95
Graphics3143.05
Innovation3512.63
Overall3532.90
Fun5231.85
Coolness125941

Comments

lordjosephdeburg 2013-12-15 22:33

Well that was very indie. Dont want to spoil for others but an enjoyable experience.

flyinpig5 2013-12-16 20:15

I think it would've been better with a second ending, but it's really nice apart from that.

ammaralsharekh 2013-12-16 21:31

Thank for pass

dustystylus 2013-12-16 21:53

Well, that was depressing. (but not rated badly for being so!) A rather philosophically existential message. I think I'll have a little cry now.

ammaralsharekh 2013-12-16 22:34

thanks DustyStylus.
Enjoy sometimes to hear some people tell the truth. But after a while they stop to talk they can not continue

raisedmedia 2013-12-17 00:21

Great mood.

mtrc 2013-12-17 00:23

Very atmospheric! The music was so beautiful. Well done on putting it all together. I enjoyed it a whole bunch.

rhysd 2013-12-17 00:25

It was an experience. I wouldn't say a nice one but I enjoyed my time playing it. It would have been better with an alternative ending, but I can see you got a lot done within the time you had :) Good job.

garethiw 2013-12-17 09:45

Bleak seems like a fitting word to describe this one. You certainly got the message across!

snoringfrog 2013-12-17 10:46

Hmm...interesting. Very fitting music.

abdurrahmankh 2013-12-17 17:17

hey ... nice game, didnt find the other ending

ammaralsharekh 2013-12-17 18:24

Hi abdurrahmankh No other ending and this is what I wrote in my game

mrblade 2013-12-17 19:14

I can't find any other ending? Very nice music. Pretty nic sky box.

soy_yuma 2013-12-19 21:19

It's really depressing. I think telling the truth is the hard path, but the only one worth walking. Any way, I liked the island. I like the exploration and the narrative. Good job!

simianlogic 2013-12-30 06:11

I'm not sure I would call this a game -- more of an interactive essay. I found the narrative pretty... uh... unmoving, mostly due to the inconsistent/vague writing. You obviously did something wrong to end up on this island... helping poor people is a nice sentiment, but how were you helping? Why do I care about saving you/me? What's with the trees?

The music was quite soothing, though.

ammaralsharekh 2014-01-05 05:16

Hi SimianLogic ,

When I was kid they told me "Bad people go to jail"
but when I grew up I saw some good people in jail

xrm0 2014-01-05 12:55

The initial text when the player tells her story sometimes is hard to read because of the text color and the background. Blue and black are the hardest ones. I think it would be better if you choose one color and stick to that.

2014-01-05 15:34

Hello,

Nice game, it took two days until it struck me despair of getting on the water :). Regardless of the captain death in every attempt, the accompanying music is very beautiful .. Liked. Thanks