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Timestamp	Since previous	Game		Vary's comment
May 2 02:25:08		Lil' Red Witch	♥ 2	Very cute and fun game! I LOVE the artstyle, especially the blue potion cottage on the top left of the map. The flight momentum felt right, just floaty enough to be somewhat challenging but satisfying once you've got it down. The only thing I would change would just be the audio balancing - the pickup/system sounds feel a little too loud compared to the background music. Overall, great job!
May 2 02:44:32	19m 24s	Fork This	♥ 2	omg. I love the music and the driving is super fun. Going around corners with speed and driving off the ramps is great. Also love that you added collision animation/sound! The first time through I missed the order details as well as the box highlights so it was a little confusing, but once you know the objective it's great. Excellent work!
May 2 02:57:57	13m 25s	BALA!!!	♥ 4	This is a fun take on kitchen games! I love the art, especially the chef portrait and the title screen, absolutely beautiful. The humor is great too, from the flies and socks to a customer potentially being served a completely incorrect dish. Great work!
May 3 06:55:24	27h 57m	Dear friend	♥ 2	As everyone else has mentioned, the art style is incredible. It's so soft and comfy I feel like it'd fit right into Steam's Indie Games page. The music goes together with it so well. I love how it picks up as you progress your route and I like how soft the sound is when you crash. I also like how the camera keeps up with the speed of the owl, it's such a small thing but it makes so much sense that it'd go faster as you float down faster. The art, audio, and simple gameplay (but challenging level) go together just so so so well! This is honestly my favorite submission I've seen so far!
May 3 07:19:05	23m 41s	Mouth Feel	♥ 3	This is so hilarious and stupid in the best way possible. Very creative, good job!
May 5 03:35:49	44h 16m	Rain On Their Parade!	♥ 3	This was really cute and fun! I like how each level added more and more elements that weren't spoiled in the level select screen - the scarecrows especially were a very pleasant surprise. Super polished game, what a great job!
May 8 21:18:22	89h 42m	A Blacksmith's Gift	♥ 1	The simple controls and challenging level make this a very fun game! I really like the concept though it took me until my second try to understand the purpose of the slap (other than it being funny) and realize that I don't want to damage my own sword. I felt like the level design was perfect as well, it was hard but not so hard that I wanted to give up. Took a few tries to deliver that SS and it felt satisfying to do so. As some others have mentioned, I do wish there was some audio. Overall incredible job, especially considering you did this alone!
May 8 21:47:57	29m 35s	Fed Up Delivery	♥ 1	Once I got the hang of the driving, this was quite fun. The key, I think, is to just never reverse. The actual throwing mechanic was jank and I see by your description that it was purposeful and I think that adds to the charm. I've had to drive right up to buildings and mass toss packages hoping one would land. Shift 5 was incredible. Having all the packages and garbage build up and block my view was very funny. I'd grab one and just shake it around to throw objects up while repeating "I'm fine!" and trying to drive to my destination. AND you did all this alone?! Amazing work!
May 8 21:56:51	8m 54s	Thats So Punny	♥ 2	Oh neat!! We had "joke delivery" on our brainstorm board for this jam and ended up doing something else, so I'm glad to have across a game that went with that interpretation. As others have said, this is very well polished and the voice over was great, especially those "haha's" to the dad jokes. Great job!
Apr 16 03:28:45	8237h 31m	Then Came A Stork	♥ 1	Ohh this was a vibe. The visuals are wonderful and I LOVE the dialogue audio, you really get a feel for the different personalities even though not a single word is spoken. The long stretches of flying were made calming with the visuals and the audio working together so perfectly. I really like the last bit too, I didn't expect the camera and player change, that really elevated this entry for me. Great job!