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Oct 8 09:51:49 Grand Prix Nothing ♥ 0 Love the MicroMachines vibes! I would have liked some checkpoints (god damn hammers!). Very good work!
Oct 8 10:05:48 13m 59s Rottenville ♥ 1 I didn't manage to kill the big zombie but I had fun! Good work!
Oct 8 11:23:53 1h 18m Hobo Sapiens ♥ 2 Awesome graphical mood! Seems like a cool adventure game but I wasn't sure what to do. I would say it is a bit too much slow paced for me. Very good work!
Oct 8 11:35:41 11m 48s SYNTHMAN ♥ 1 Felt like an horror game! Never got to pass the rats tho. Weird game but interesting mood!
Oct 8 11:52:38 16m 57s Beyond the Veil ♥ 3 Very good mood! Didn't managed to kill the boss. A bit too much text for my taste. You almost have gamepad controls, just the interact button was missing for my xbox360 controller. Not my type of game but very good work overall!
Oct 8 12:07:34 14m 56s A course at the mall ♥ 1 My first run gave me a shirt and a guard at the very beginning and my second run gave me all the shirts I needed and I didn't saw any guard. Aaaah, the joy of random generation ^^ Good work and extra point for the humor!
Oct 8 12:19:35 12m 01s HOBO RAMPAGE ♥ 5 Didn't manage to get through the 3 knife guys. Awesome street of rage mood. Love the music!!! Good work!
Oct 8 12:31:54 12m 19s Darkness is the nothing ♥ 2 Good work on the graphics and mood! The controls were a bit clunky. I got stuck after the big hand with the glowing thing. Good work!
Oct 28 09:28:37 476h 56m Undead Alley ♥ 0 I liked the graphics. The mood could be increase by a music. Sometimes the upgrades were not clear (is a fish better than a crowbar?). Good work overall!
Oct 28 09:32:24 3m 47s Dive Dog ♥ 1 Good execution but I didn't get how it is relate to the theme. Good work anyway!
Oct 28 09:37:08 4m 44s Modulizer ♥ 0 Nice little game. I didn't manage to open the chests. I think the ennemies were too quick in two ways : their speed, and the fact that they jump at you right as the room start. Good work overall!
Oct 28 09:41:55 4m 47s Stealing is Theft ♥ 1 Funny. I wasn't always clear where to stand to get things. I liked all the lines when you pick up clothes. Good point for humor!
Oct 28 09:45:55 4m 00s Art, Not N.O.T.H.I.N.G. ♥ 1 Nice. The controls were a bit too snappy for me. I liked the art! The graphics and the music made a good mood! Good entry.
Oct 28 09:51:21 5m 26s GREEN DOG ♥ 1 Not really a "game" but I had fun!
Oct 28 10:49:27 58m 06s What the Hell! ♥ 1 The boss pushed me out of bounds and then the game crashed. The core game is fun. Could use some improvement but good work overall!
Oct 28 11:01:08 11m 41s Missing Entry ♥ 0 Interesting but I didn't saw the goal of the game. I was adding entries and the game kept looping. Is there an ending? I liked the mood!
Oct 28 11:09:29 8m 21s The Hunt For KNOWLEDGE ♥ 0 I had absolutely no ideas what was going on. I manage to climb a bit but it seems very random to me. I would suggest having some hints on screen while playing. I saw in your description that you are 12 years old. I wasn't able to do things like that at your age! Keep up the good work and soon you will be an awesome game creator! Cheers!
Oct 28 11:22:42 13m 13s Broken Broom Adventure! ♥ 0 Moving the character around was fun, so you got that part right. It is not really a "game" since you can't win or loose but I recognize the effort on the level generation part. Cheers!
Oct 28 11:25:16 2m 34s Beat Builder ♥ 0 Funny! The only complaint I have is that the loop doesn't continue between screens. I would also love to have differents icons corresponding to the different instruments and to be able to mute / unmute them during play! Cheers!
Oct 28 12:25:43 1h 00m Ex Nihilo ♥ 2 I liked the mood of the game. Not a big fan of survival game but you got the execution right! Good work overall!
Oct 28 12:31:13 5m 30s Battleground Command ♥ 1 Unofortunately with my shitty computer I wasn't able to play without lag. Good effort tho! It seems like there were a lot of ennemies and not that many ammunitions! Cheers!
Oct 28 12:39:33 8m 20s Orbiter ♥ 0 Original idea. However, I do not see how it related to the theme. Also, a feedback for when you are doing the right thing would be nice. Good work overall!
Oct 28 14:17:34 1h 38m [NSFW] Naked Escape ♥ 0 Seems interesting but unfortunately I didn't get to do anything because I was just lost in the dark (webgl build).
Oct 28 14:31:03 13m 29s Path to UwU ♥ 0 Not bad for a Unity noob! I liked the simple but effective art. After the picture I found myself lost in the void. Nice little platformer game. Cheers!
Oct 28 14:44:41 13m 38s Consciousness in a jar ♥ 1 First time the graphics didn't appered, second and third time I was stuck in the ground and wasn't able to move. Seems like a nice game from what I saw in your video, unfortunately since I can't play it, I can't rate it :/
Oct 28 14:49:58 5m 17s Objectophile ♥ 0 Without a doubt the best landmark dating simulator I've played!
Oct 28 14:57:41 7m 43s Tubizo and the Dark Detrimental Wizard of Chaos ♥ 1 Oh, someone actually thought about azerty users! I saw many games with the same idea, yours is really good. The bird was a little slow for me. The voice acting really improved the mood. Good work!
Oct 28 15:17:51 20m 10s 10-31 Robbery in Progress ♥ 1 Hi, I would suggest you upload your zip to a site like itch.io wo people don't have to download it to play. Cheers!
Oct 29 09:06:52 17h 49m The legend of Bit ♥ 1 I saved the world! Good little game! I especially liked the mood with the simple graphics. Since the sword is glued to the left side of the character, he has a better range if you hit an ennemy that is to your left. Good work!