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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Crowbeak's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 25 03:34:00 | Karma Cycle | I'm just having too much trouble figuring out how to get anything done. The game doesn't really provide sufficient feedback. | |
| Aug 25 03:45:00 | 11m 00s | Two Selves | I feel like your preface should have been an afterward. You did a good job of making a game that could be fit to any number of situations/feelings, which includes transgender issues, but by prefacing it with your experiences you color the lenses right before handing the glasses off to the player. |
| Aug 25 03:49:00 | 4m 00s | Secret Place | I liked it, but that font is so very hard to read. |
| Aug 25 04:11:00 | 22m 00s | Mage Hunter | Longer and better fleshed than most Twine entries turn out. I think I would have been able to tell you're a writer even if you weren't taking the opportunity to advertise in the sidebar. |
| Aug 25 04:20:00 | 9m 00s | Generic Space Adventures | Without really being given a goal at the beginning, it just feels like aimless wandering. |
| Aug 25 04:21:00 | 1m 00s | Hers and His | If Dropbox is really the only way you have to distribute this, you should be able to just put the file(s) in your public folder, unzipped, and link to it so people can play without having to download anything. |
| Aug 25 09:45:00 | 5h 24m | On the edge of Earth: 5000 | It took me forever to work out how to get the info I needed from console C, but when I did, I enjoyed the mechanic. Brilliantly done. The toilet was also an excellent touch. |
| Aug 25 09:49:00 | 4m 00s | ServerSphereICE | Having the look and the aiming decoupled makes this game very difficult to control. I do like the graphics, though. |
| Aug 25 10:47:00 | 58m 00s | What Could Possibly Go Wrong? | This is great but it really, REALLY needs the ability to just hold the mouse down to shoot. A trigger warning about that potentially epilepsy-inducing flashing on the game over screen might not be out of place, either. xD |
| Aug 25 14:02:00 | 3h 15m | Bond | I played through this whole thing in spite of poor level design choices (I shouldn't have to die to find out what I have to do to move forward, though at least there were checkpoints often) because I liked how you were using the theme enough to keep trying. |
| Aug 26 10:54:00 | 20h 52m | Through the Mirror | Nicely brain-bending. |
| Aug 26 11:04:00 | 10m 00s | Legacy of Lamas | I feel like this could be improved post-compo to be a really cool action shooting game, but right now it feels like a seed. |
| Aug 27 05:44:00 | 18h 40m | Into the Woods | This is interesting. I like the choice of worlds to cross. |
| Aug 27 06:01:00 | 17m 00s | Sleep | This is really well written, and the effects used on the text were used to good effect. |
| Aug 27 12:58:00 | 6h 57m | HopSlide | You are a brother truckin' mad genius. |
| Aug 29 11:58:00 | 47h 00m | Ice Cream Aliens | This is a great idea, but the controls killed it for me. |
| Aug 29 12:05:00 | 7m 00s | Emergence | This is an awesome idea and I would love to see it polished. In its current state it isn't very fun, though I believe it would be with some iteration. |
| Aug 29 12:09:00 | 4m 00s | Blue Screen | I love the idea (and the graphics), but the controls feel a little unresponsive. |
| Aug 29 12:39:00 | 30m 00s | Capsule | Well written, with graphics and CSS used to good effect. I quite enjoyed this. |
| Aug 29 12:47:00 | 8m 00s | Onanigan | I cannot get around the underhang. I'm not coordinated enough. It's too bad, too, because I love the concept and the art and the judicious use of sound and silence. |
| Aug 29 13:04:00 | 17m 00s | Driver's License | I keep having to restart because the left hand stops working. :( I really enjoy this, too -- the silliness is great. |
| Aug 31 05:21:00 | 40h 17m | Our Worlds | This was really well executed. I didn't finish it, but only because I'm kinda bad at platformers. |
| Aug 31 05:58:00 | 37m 00s | Mushroom connects | I felt like there was a little tooooo much path retracing, but aside from that I really like this. I love the character sprite and how he's still flat when he's sideways. |
| Aug 31 06:38:00 | 40m 00s | World Absorber | It is really difficult to figure out how this works, but once figured out it's pretty great. Really need to work on a tutorial next time, though. |
| Aug 31 08:35:00 | 1h 57m | Pulley Planet | I love all the graphics, but especially the fact that you can see the planets in the background. They helped me remember what beats what. |
| Aug 31 08:50:00 | 15m 00s | Lava Is Last | I had to read other people's comments to get it, because I, too, missed the text in the corner at first. |
| Aug 31 08:53:00 | 3m 00s | Yay, progress! | I found this quite entertaining. Love the sarcasm and I'm glad you at least submitted something. Ov |
| Aug 31 14:16:00 | 5h 23m | Connecting LD30 to the Real World | This is really cool. I look forward to uncovering more of the map. |
| Aug 31 14:27:00 | 11m 00s | > Continue | This reminds me of that one XKCD comic. |
| Aug 31 14:32:00 | 5m 00s | Stanley Squeaks and the Emerald Burrito | This is a really neat idea and the animations are cute. |
| Aug 31 15:05:00 | 33m 00s | Benn's Adventure | There are a few spots where the ceiling gets in the way of jumping, which was rather frustrating, but I liked it overall. I appreciated the LD community member jokes. |
| Sep 6 05:13:00 | 134h 08m | Glass Heart Empire | I'm confused about why I only get one turn with a fourth point of movement when I upgrade movement and I feel like there's a little too much grinding, but overall I really like this entry. |
| Sep 6 06:40:00 | 1h 27m | A New and Beautiful World | This is really well written. |
| Sep 6 06:52:00 | 12m 00s | First Encounter | Interesting concept, though the execution needs work, I think. |
| Sep 7 01:02:00 | 18h 10m | Collision | This is a really neat concept, but if you choose to keep working on it, you need to figure out a better way to help the player understand what to do. |
| Sep 8 11:07:00 | 34h 05m | Warmageddon | This is a neat idea, though I live alone in the boonies of a foreign country and can't just rustle up someone to play with. I think it would be worth expanding into a full game. |
| Sep 8 11:19:00 | 12m 00s | Faction Wars | I would love to see this expanded upon. |
| Sep 8 11:27:00 | 8m 00s | Circular Logic | Oh Benn, this is glorious. Connection to the theme is tenuous, but the gameplay is excellent. I wish it were longer. |
| Sep 8 11:43:00 | 16m 00s | FACED | I like the game, but I muted it pretty quickly because the music got annoying really fast. It speeds up, but for no apparent reason... and there's a well-established expectation that faster music means you're running out of time. |
| Sep 8 11:47:00 | 4m 00s | Bump Da World | This is well-suited to touch, I think. As a game being played with my mouse on a computer, I was limited by my tendonitis. |