Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → Jasmine Cooper
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2020 | 46 | Keep it alive | 👥 | Miscen...AGAIN!? | jam | 1131 | 3.53 | 3.33 | 3.61 | 3.00 | 3.79 | 3.81 | 3.59 | 3.25 |
I enjoyed the visual novel! I wasn't able to complete the web version due to text/scrolling issues, but the biggest quip I had was:
1. The U.I. 2. Lack of Audio 3. Short-cutting accessed scenes (to negate reading text multiple times).
Great job for a 2-person team! I feel like a VN is ambitious.
Don't beat yourself up! Like everyone has said - you live and you learn. You're not the first to show up late to the race. As long as you're willing to run again, that's all that matters!
Really enjoyed the game mechanic to this! I didn't really find it to be that humorous, but that aside, gameplay/design/art were all spot on! Fantastic work, team.
My biggest critique:
1. Color change on the 'universe' when it has been disengaged. I was playing a close game (releasing it right in-front of the ship) and would be unable to tell if I could quickly get out a shot or not. Sometimes I was sure I had disconnected, when I hadn't, or that I had picked the orb back up, when I hadn't.
Hey, great job on creating a solid game model. 1. I think the concept was good. Adding the falling platforms was a nice change of pace. I think having danger be inherent at the beginning would make the player be on edge more. 2.The art animation for the horse was well done! I loved the loading screen. 3. I think the music and sound did it's job! Good work there.