applejollygarden 2026-10-19 22:27 ♥ 2
Nice artstyle
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD60 → Pigeon Prompt Engineer
By made-in-china, unpickel, kirbcicle and clevy
| Percentile | ||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | LD60 | Ever | |
| Overall | 20 | |||||
| Fun | 20 | |||||
| Innovation | 20 | |||||
| Theme | 20 | |||||
| Graphics | 21 | |||||
| Audio | 20 | |||||
| Humor | 20 | |||||
| Mood | 20 | |||||
Nice artstyle
A masterpiece. Lol'd so hard when they went to see Xavier
@applejollygarden thank you so much <333 So glad you like it :3
@zyl he's locked in
:3
never thought that i would locked in so hard on a GAME JAM visual novelle. Good job guys! Liam seems very cute :3
I had absolutely no idea where that was going to lead, but I greatly enjoyed the journey! The writing was great, the humor landed for me, I liked the art, and the sweetly melancholy rooftop toast at the end was a vibe. Plus the music was awesome as well!
My only real feedback (and this is mostly a matter of taste) is that I would have enjoyed more agency during the story. Even if the story had a fixed end point, having some options to choose during dialog would have helped keep me more engaged with the visual novel as an interactive medium, rather than just as a comic.
Overall though, I liked this quite a lot! You accomplished what you sought out to do very well! I'm also delighted to have learned about the pigeon project as a result of this game, so thank you for that
OMG I can't believe you have made such an excellent work!! I love this sooo much, the art style is really unique and interesting, the story is also very fun, and I really love the prompting pigeon part! Really a very good game, thank you for making it!
the art, music, and story are all so thoughtfully done! Such a wonderful game overall. had a great time playing it!
@sasik @anima-animus049 @dracco-0n Thank you 💜💜💜 We are all so happy you loved the game and we had a blast making it too!!! Thank you for playing!
@koolruz You make a great point to be honest! We didn't really think of that and we were figuring out about renpy for the first time hahaha but we'll def keep that feedback for next time! We really appreciate it thank you!💜
Great art, great audio, great vibes, and a thoughtful story. Everything comes together really nicely to create an enjoyable experience. Congrats!
Fun story and nice artwork and audio! Like another commenter said, I would've liked more to do during the story. I was also a little confused about what to do dung the pigeon training process, but eventually made it through. Great job!
art, music, and story are all so thoughtfully done! great audio, great vibes. Great job, your game is amazing! I loved playing it, super cool
Wow! Probably the funniest, most creative submission I've played so far. Loved the art, music, premise and writing. My only complaint is that there's really only one part where you get to play yourself. Also, then ending came kinda abruptly. Other than that, top marks 👏
Loved it, I liked the references to the real world stuff lol and the graphics and music are great.
