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Down The Rabbit Hole
Down The Rabbit Hole
By doppler-affect
View on ldjam.com
| Category | Rank | Score | Count |
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| Overall | 460 | 3.52 | 24 | |
| Fun | 546 | 3.21 | 23 | |
| Innovation | 416 | 3.27 | 24 | |
| Theme | 412 | 3.72 | 24 | |
| Graphics | 594 | 3.31 | 24 | |
| Mood | 112 | 4.09 | 23 | |
Comments
This is great, I don't think I've ever seen a choose your own adventure book type game at a jam before. I've seen other text based games but this ones presentation really made it feel different. Outside the box and I love it.
I quite like how you never really know what to expect with the choices you choose. The writing and graphics keeps me on my toes in a good way!
This is really cool! Such a difference to the typical games that everyone makes well done I quite enjoyed this!
agraffs
2025-04-08 08:23
Simple graphics but it does the work. You have no idea of how it's going to end as you go on which is nice.
pikario
2025-04-08 08:35
Great writing, found 4 different endings. Well balanced, just enough text to not be overwhelm and want to know more, great entry!
bakuzen
2025-04-08 18:11
I must've played through this a dozen times to make sure I got all the routes and read the story properly. I love how much care was put into the writing, and the visuals are really striking-- overall a great combination! Awesome work ^^
lyamgtt
2025-04-09 09:55
Really original, loved it !!
Nice branching path story game. Good stuff!
raynorr
2025-04-09 18:36
Pretty interesting game, but i can't load :'(
Nice mood and great writing!
deadcode
2025-04-10 14:49
I'm usually not the biggest fan of such games but this one I definitely enjoyed! Was really relaxing ant the story is very well written and intriguing. Great work!
wyzal
2025-04-10 15:06
Great HTML page novel. Interesting story. Good job!
mamboman
2025-04-10 19:40
Nice entry! I enjoyed reading it. The graphics set the mood nicely but leaving enough room for your own imagination =)
texugo
2025-04-12 16:04
I think this is the first time I've played a text choose your own adventure game in a JAM! Nice vibes and idea!
Nice little text adventure game. I don't know why but I cracked up when the safety pin made the character feel safer haha. A little short, but leaves you wanting more. Well done.
ryusui
2025-04-13 04:24
I feel like I want to know more about these characters and what happened. I do wish there was an ending that gave a definitive sense that our protagonist makes out of this alive and sane instead of dying or succumbing to space madness, but I suspect that would be out of genre. XD
*"In space, no one can hear you cry."*
Cool idea, never would've thought to use Ludum Dare like a writing prompt. It's well written and there are actually seemingly quite a few branching paths, I found 3 endings myself. I like the one where I block the hole in my spaceship with my body
rbbhn
2025-04-22 19:51
The cutaway art was haunting, the writing was engaging and set the mood well, and it's just the right length to make you want to replay it to see what the other choices lead to. Overall, very well done! Solid entry. Congrats!