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Down The Rabbit Hole

By doppler-affect

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall4603.5224
Fun5463.2123
Innovation4163.2724
Theme4123.7224
Graphics5943.3124
Mood1124.0923

Comments

jon-curtin 2025-04-07 22:52

This is great, I don't think I've ever seen a choose your own adventure book type game at a jam before. I've seen other text based games but this ones presentation really made it feel different. Outside the box and I love it.

thomas-higgins 2025-04-07 22:58

I quite like how you never really know what to expect with the choices you choose. The writing and graphics keeps me on my toes in a good way!

morepixels 2025-04-07 22:59

This is really cool! Such a difference to the typical games that everyone makes well done I quite enjoyed this!

agraffs 2025-04-08 08:23

Simple graphics but it does the work. You have no idea of how it's going to end as you go on which is nice.

pikario 2025-04-08 08:35

Great writing, found 4 different endings. Well balanced, just enough text to not be overwhelm and want to know more, great entry!

bakuzen 2025-04-08 18:11

I must've played through this a dozen times to make sure I got all the routes and read the story properly. I love how much care was put into the writing, and the visuals are really striking-- overall a great combination! Awesome work ^^

lyamgtt 2025-04-09 09:55

Really original, loved it !!

soul-grinder 2025-04-09 18:21

Nice branching path story game. Good stuff!

raynorr 2025-04-09 18:36

Pretty interesting game, but i can't load :'(

milestone-games 2025-04-09 23:11

Nice mood and great writing!

deadcode 2025-04-10 14:49

I'm usually not the biggest fan of such games but this one I definitely enjoyed! Was really relaxing ant the story is very well written and intriguing. Great work!

wyzal 2025-04-10 15:06

Great HTML page novel. Interesting story. Good job!

mamboman 2025-04-10 19:40

Nice entry! I enjoyed reading it. The graphics set the mood nicely but leaving enough room for your own imagination =)

texugo 2025-04-12 16:04

I think this is the first time I've played a text choose your own adventure game in a JAM! Nice vibes and idea!

jacob-kreiner 2025-04-12 19:00

Nice little text adventure game. I don't know why but I cracked up when the safety pin made the character feel safer haha. A little short, but leaves you wanting more. Well done.

ryusui 2025-04-13 04:24

I feel like I want to know more about these characters and what happened. I do wish there was an ending that gave a definitive sense that our protagonist makes out of this alive and sane instead of dying or succumbing to space madness, but I suspect that would be out of genre. XD

*"In space, no one can hear you cry."*

deadroach 2025-04-14 06:28

Cool idea, never would've thought to use Ludum Dare like a writing prompt. It's well written and there are actually seemingly quite a few branching paths, I found 3 endings myself. I like the one where I block the hole in my spaceship with my body

rbbhn 2025-04-22 19:51

The cutaway art was haunting, the writing was engaging and set the mood well, and it's just the right length to make you want to replay it to see what the other choices lead to. Overall, very well done! Solid entry. Congrats!