ladybenko 2024-10-07 18:19
hi! a visual novel with spiders, I didn't see that one coming :) I got to the part of the minigame of catching flies, but after losing it I got an IndexedDB error Screenshot 2024-10-07 at 8.19.17 PM.png
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD56 → Spider Business
By vindicta
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 105 | 3.69 | 20 | |
| Fun | 182 | 3.31 | 21 | |
| Innovation | 172 | 3.30 | 20 | |
| Theme | 71 | 4.00 | 21 | |
| Graphics | 183 | 3.47 | 20 | |
| Audio | 89 | 3.58 | 19 | |
| Humor | 31 | 3.88 | 20 | |
| Mood | 131 | 3.50 | 21 |
hi! a visual novel with spiders, I didn't see that one coming :) I got to the part of the minigame of catching flies, but after losing it I got an IndexedDB error Screenshot 2024-10-07 at 8.19.17 PM.png
That fly catching minigame is tough! A bit more feedback for each fly caught would help a lot in making that part more fun :)
nice idea and good realisation
interesting idea
Neat idea and implementation, but I will say the sound can be a bit piercing, especially with headphones on
A visual novel indeed. I like the manner in which the spider talkd about web fees, it made me feel like the agony of actually starting a business and all the fees and rules you have to go through not to mention it's a pun with "world wide web" fees
a bit lengthy, a bit buggy, but it is a visual novel. good job :)
Ren'py flashbang me when opening it, love visual novels and the puns the dialogue were really silly and cute. The bug catching game was kinda bugged and scuffed though.
Nice idea to make a visual novel with this theme ! The beggining was great, however I also ran into the bug described by @ladybenko
It is a very interesting idea to create the visual novel not in anime style!)
It's is charming but the error with the flycatching minigame really hurts it.