mdotedot 2023-10-02 19:02
Not my cup of tea. But at least you published something. That is more than a lot of others do!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD54 → A Macabre Story of A Limited Head-Space
By chimney-eggs
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 2.75 | 10 | ||
| Fun | 2.55 | 11 | ||
| Innovation | 3.25 | 10 | ||
| Theme | 2.87 | 10 | ||
| Graphics | 1.75 | 8 | ||
| Audio | 1.00 | 7 | ||
| Humor | 3.18 | 10 | ||
| Mood | 2.81 | 10 |
Not my cup of tea. But at least you published something. That is more than a lot of others do!
Not my genre. Confused by the different size of the text. Good job!
I think I got into an endless loop and didn't really know how to get out/reach the end. The pacing of text feels like an explosion/visual novel but without all the bells and whistles that reward you as you read it. I thought it was interesting how it progressed based on the choices. Leaning more into the puzzle/mystery might have made it more enjoyable for me.
This is weird! I like the mechanic a lot, but I got stuck pretty quickly (at Door)—wish I’d been able to find out what happened next, but everything I tried either took me back through the loop or gave me a "Hmm no..." message.
I'm not a big reader, but I'm surprised by how much I enjoyed it! I did, however, seem to get stuck after a decent few discoveries (I really feel like I've tried everything), so I am not certain if that is the end or if I am at fault for not understanding the puzzle. Good writing, but it would never hurt to have some background audio to spice up the mood. Keep on doing great work :)
That was silly and fun! I think I got caught in a loop but it was humorous and I'm glad you had a fun jam.