thedude3600 2021-10-05 22:41
Interesting little text adventure. It would have been nice to have a bit more branching, it seemed pretty linear for a text adventure. Good Job
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD49 → Emergency Power
By mythalore
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 1433 | 2.84 | 21 | |
| Fun | 1424 | 2.63 | 21 | |
| Innovation | 1417 | 2.52 | 21 | |
| Theme | 1469 | 2.33 | 20 | |
| Humor | 1036 | 2.47 | 20 | |
| Mood | 1351 | 2.58 | 20 |
Interesting little text adventure. It would have been nice to have a bit more branching, it seemed pretty linear for a text adventure. Good Job
Pretty nice text-based adventure, short and sweet.
You could have use at least some blips for sound effects, its hard to enjoy something completely mute. Good work on the writing. :)
Good work! Keep it up!
I enjoyed that! It's quite a compelling story considering it's pretty short. :smile:
I like how the story unfolds more if you don't just follow instructions, which what I did at first (not sure what that says about me :grin:)
Text novel damn so good
You know, its intetesting. This game has more depth then i thought by first. Its short, but player has a lot of freedom in the way he plays.
Short but sweet, minimal but evocative. I've only got one gripe with it: it feels a lot like you used "roguelike" in the blurb to fool people into playing a straight text adventure. To be clear, I'm always down for a text adventure, but I've seen enough weak attempts at "roguelikes" in LD that the label has become a bit of a groaner for me. ^_^;
@ryusui evocative was exactly what I was going for! I used roguelike mostly out of tiredness/looming deadline but I like to think there's an element with loops through each robot too. :)
Text based games are very unique when it comes to storytelling. The only thing I wish this game had to embelish is any sort of soundtrack or small noises when choosing any of these options.
Besides that, nice work!
@tiberiusuciu Thanks and yeah me too, ran out of time. ':)