sparky99 2016-12-12 14:29
Windows link is broken for me.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD37 → Inside The Office
By darkhaul
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Theme | 223 | 3.78 | ||
| Mood | 314 | 3.10 | ||
| Graphics | 399 | 2.87 | ||
| Audio | 402 | 2.35 | ||
| Innovation | 476 | 2.65 | ||
| Overall | 531 | 2.83 | ||
| Fun | 571 | 2.36 | ||
| Coolness | 1133 | 39 |
Windows link is broken for me.
Supah Cool!
@Sparked99 fixed windows link now, sorry for that
Link is broken, but I found it on game jolt. I really liked the graphics!! However, there is not too much gameplay here, I would focus more on gameplay in future. Nice mood though, and quite deep, so you get innovation and mood stars for that. Overall.. I liked it :). Also, I have to give you 5 stars for theme, because it is in.. One room, and there is literally nothing else to this theme :(
Simple but nice :D
It is a great beginning :) You have a (very nicely drawn) environment, mechanics in place for sorting the contents of the archive drawers, some background for the decisions, and a feedback/result mechanism.
You should definately make a post-LD version, adding some additional outcomes and/or files, and maybe a restart and/or quit-button on the result-page.
Also, I can only assume that we are stuck with the job for live, considering that there is no door in the room! :)
@Simnium I will definately try, those are all things i wanted to add in but couldn't because I ran out of time :( Thanks for the feedback though!
It's nice and short. Gets in, gets out, and does so well. I feel like if this was a episodic game in the next episode my character would be an alcoholic from his choices though, but at least the boss was pleased :D. The game seems like a good foundation. Good Job!
Any chance to get a linux/mac build out? :-D
Felt a little short, I think it could be much more, but nice nonetheless
I could not put all the files in the red or green box even if I wanted to!
I like the simpleness of it contrasting with life changing consequences of your actions. But it needed more details or endings, etc. But it's a nice start ;)
A short little game, lasting three attempts for me to see some of the different outcomes.
The graphics looks nice, a simple stylized look that works. I would've preferred a different colour for the folders, as they're the same as the rejection outbox.
Audio is a little lacking, with (I think) only the drawer opening having sound. It's a good drawer sound though, so a 1-out-of-1 score on that one. ;)
The final results being text and there being no restart button were a shame. I see you mentioned you ran out of time, so I assume this game was a wise lesson in time management for you. :D I agree that there's enough meat to this concept to polish it up post-LD a bit, to get some more satisfying final results in there.
Keep it up!
I like the stuff written in the files, the models are pretty nice. The light fading is cool.
It's a bit short but the concept is interesting, a kind of "HR simulator".^^
Apparently, the boss seems to be a bit mad at me. :p
The idea is cool. Trying to discuss how we make decisions. Will you follow the orders.
Could add more endings.
Interesting concept, but I feel like it needs a little more work to really have emotional impact. I like what you're going for though!
Papers Please 0.5 :D!
Amaizin!
xD main idea of the game is cool,liked this project
nice try. just good!