Taken for Granite

Category	Rank	Score
Coolness	3	50
Theme	176	4.00
Humor	224	3.22
Overall	326	3.52
Innovation	366	3.27
Mood	401	3.33
Graphics	474	3.43
Fun	613	2.87

ggg01 2016-12-13 02:48

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endingchaos 2016-12-13 02:54

The painterly art style is very nice! :)

swellbastion 2016-12-13 03:23

I like the atmosphere. The way that messages keep coming in as you play is cool. Somehow I got it to run in wine on my mac :P

tylerraz 2016-12-13 03:33

Great short story and it fits the theme so well. Mini-games as progress is a bit annoying, but there was enough variety to keep it fresh.

kn2322 2016-12-13 04:09

I love the weird fantasy-modern setting of the game, it makes it really quite funny at parts. Criticism wise, the story felt a little bit forced at the ending, since the gameplay and characters weren't related, and the characters weren't developed.

piscythe 2016-12-13 04:47

I spent way too much time on the sliding puzzles.

kualitygames 2016-12-13 21:41

Interesting game really fits the theme. Cute art style.

uliana-galich 2016-12-13 22:08

style &
beautiful

pyokoanarogue 2016-12-14 00:18

very content extensive for such a short development time. I liked it a lot!

nlbi21 2016-12-14 05:08

The art is flashy, the music I liked a lot, the mirror mini-game is short but it is a good puzzle. Good game, good job. :D

teambald 2016-12-15 07:08

I really liked this. The art was The premise was interesting and did a lot a lot to make me sympathise with the main character, and the mini-games were varied enough to keep things from getting too repetitive. It's certainly an interesting way to portray disability in games, and I think the rejection letter from the Department of Magick Related Deaths & Injuries was a nice touch.

I did find a bug which froze the game completely (although the music is still going), where I jumped slightly into the side of one of the platforms in the jumping mini-game.

Only other criticism I have is that I think you include the [press Z to continue] prompt quite a lot in the conversations. It's probably only needed a few times, once at the start of a conversation at most. The ending did seem a bit unexpected, while I felt it helped me understood more about Ivy's situation and what she should do in the future, I'm not sure I understood why she had that revelation that soon. It would probably work in a longer game though

linear 2016-12-24 22:53

The idea was... strange... and definitely weird. However, I was very confused by how two maidens can have a child. I don't know. It just left me on edge the whole time.