pvwradtke 2015-12-15 04:28
Wow, I wasn't expecting a visual novel with this quality. Really, the visuals are really neat. Have you done all this in the 72 hours for the jam? Pretty much impressive.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD34 → Duoregi
By mikomikisomi
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Graphics | 153 | 4.13 | ||
| Mood | 348 | 3.42 | ||
| Overall | 692 | 3.13 | ||
| Fun | 701 | 2.92 | ||
| Innovation | 882 | 2.54 | ||
| Theme | 983 | 2.83 | ||
| Coolness | 1427 | 48 |
Wow, I wasn't expecting a visual novel with this quality. Really, the visuals are really neat. Have you done all this in the 72 hours for the jam? Pretty much impressive.
not exactly a two "button control" game but i was investet in the story
Nice artworks. Interesting that you chose a graphic novel for the game jam!
It was a bit confusing for me that referred to Noveus as her dad and talking about her actual dad... took me a while to get it.
Impressive for 72 hours. Never seen this done before.
Quite interesting story, maybe if tou had more time it would turn out better.I ship her father with Noveus, I knew it from the star c:
As a fellow visual novel maker, you'd definitely need some more polish. Otherwise, a good story about the connection between the past, the future, and an individual's growth.
Nice short story, I liked it. As with others said, it was rather confusing that syou was talking about dad and dad (and her dad seemed like he could be a she).
Thankfully there was kind of happy ending at the end :)
Interesting that you made a visual novel for this! Very good job!
Pro:
+ Cool artwork (Soiren was a bit androgynous?)
+ Great story
Con:
- Two button control theme felt a bit loose
Obs:
o It doesn't look like there is a difference between choosing either doors
o If I choose only Future the game suddenly ends... Don't know if it was intentional
Great job!
Felt pretty linear, but I guess that's okay for a jam game. The art is nice, but the protagonist doesn't really stand. Silence diminishes the mood quite a bit.