kabutakogames 2015-04-21 13:55
Cool idea, I wish it had more interactivity
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD32 → Her Pen
By mikomikisomi
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Cool idea, I wish it had more interactivity
Nice use of the theme! The pen is mightier than the sword after all. :)
Though some more interaction would've been nice, I really enjoyed this little story, good job!
Cool, another visual novel! We had a similar idea with words but yours is way more straightforward, I think it makes more sense, ahah ^^.
I liked the story, it was short but sweet, and I liked how you used RenPy to add interactivity while staying tru e to your story. I wish there was some kind of epilogue though, since the ending was a bit abrupt. Also, the music is pretty but I think switching from time to time would highlight the text even more.
Interesting artstyle. Things went a little too smoothly in the story in my opinion though, would've liked some more conflict and character and/or world building. Still a nice little read for a jam game, good job!
Lazarus-omin (from Creative Sectors):
Hey-hey, a visual novel? That's a new one for me! (at least @ LD#32) Nice!
You've created a neat lil' atmosphere there: the idea is cool, the tension is present, and your art-style is an unique one. I also liked the text-parser style interaction, that's just rare these days. The game was pretty short, and therefore was just a few points where you could take control, but I'm sure: this could've been a more complex, or a deeper project, if it didn't have to be finished in 3 days. What's your plan, will you continue the development?
Anyway, congratulations on your submitting. Keep it up!