What lies beneath the Temple

Category	Rank	Score
Humor	266	2.95
Mood	719	2.81
Theme	746	3.04
Innovation	843	2.67
Graphics	868	2.67
Fun	976	2.50
Overall	980	2.73
Coolness	1547	45

realtutsgml 2014-04-28 21:23

The game didn't have any conflict! I see potential for the game, just looks like you ran out of time. Nice work!

depp 2014-04-30 08:06

Okay, this is hilarious. I love the script.

voidqk 2014-04-30 08:09

nice start

supermsp10 2014-05-01 01:41

need a bit more work

kirbikaka 2014-05-02 05:23

Ha, I like the way you took the game. I played it twice because I thought I had missed something, and the second time around I understood the script a bit better :b

I think some of the writing could have used a bit of cleaning up. Even after playing it twice, a few lines are still confusing towards the end.
Also, I have to say that the black text on gray background once you fall into the 30 seconds part is kind of hard to read. I actually didn't see anything at all until I saw a bit of a smudge on my screen and turned my brightness up.

One thing I REALLY REALLY liked about the game, though, is the very first line. I absolutely loved that you used "...right?", implying that you press the right arrow key to move. I would have liked to see you pull that off with the other buttons too, but I guess it's hard to easily write "R" and "ESC" into lines smoothly. Still, it's a very interesting game, and a humorous take on the theme :]!

mekuri 2014-05-02 08:28

This was.. different.. and short :P - I think I see what you tried to do here. with some more work (time) this could turn into an interesting game.

zyxer 2014-05-03 11:45

This game is really funny. I like how you build up my hopes with "is this gras?" and then smash them with an empty room. ;)

Good job!