realtutsgml 2014-04-28 21:23
The game didn't have any conflict! I see potential for the game, just looks like you ran out of time. Nice work!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD29 → What lies beneath the Temple
By oobie
| Percentile | ||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | LD29 | Ever | |
| Humor | 266 | 2.95 | ||||
| Mood | 719 | 2.81 | ||||
| Theme | 746 | 3.04 | ||||
| Innovation | 843 | 2.67 | ||||
| Graphics | 868 | 2.67 | ||||
| Fun | 976 | 2.50 | ||||
| Overall | 980 | 2.73 | ||||
| Coolness | 1547 | 45 | ||||
The game didn't have any conflict! I see potential for the game, just looks like you ran out of time. Nice work!
Okay, this is hilarious. I love the script.
nice start
need a bit more work
Ha, I like the way you took the game. I played it twice because I thought I had missed something, and the second time around I understood the script a bit better :b
I think some of the writing could have used a bit of cleaning up. Even after playing it twice, a few lines are still confusing towards the end.
Also, I have to say that the black text on gray background once you fall into the 30 seconds part is kind of hard to read. I actually didn't see anything at all until I saw a bit of a smudge on my screen and turned my brightness up.
One thing I REALLY REALLY liked about the game, though, is the very first line. I absolutely loved that you used "...right?", implying that you press the right arrow key to move. I would have liked to see you pull that off with the other buttons too, but I guess it's hard to easily write "R" and "ESC" into lines smoothly. Still, it's a very interesting game, and a humorous take on the theme :]!
This was.. different.. and short :P - I think I see what you tried to do here. with some more work (time) this could turn into an interesting game.
This game is really funny. I like how you build up my hopes with "is this gras?" and then smash them with an empty room. ;)
Good job!