mrblade 2013-08-26 16:54
This game is alright, I guess. I got stuck once I got the key, got in the house, went in the right door and went right. With the forks, and bowl...Puking or something? 4/10.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD27 → Detective Shadow
By mandraw
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 3 | 62 | ||
| Humor | 424 | 1.87 | ||
| Mood | 453 | 2.44 | ||
| Audio | 485 | 1.70 | ||
| Graphics | 524 | 2.38 | ||
| Theme | 530 | 2.48 | ||
| Innovation | 547 | 2.25 | ||
| Fun | 578 | 2.00 | ||
| Overall | 593 | 2.21 |
This game is alright, I guess. I got stuck once I got the key, got in the house, went in the right door and went right. With the forks, and bowl...Puking or something? 4/10.
hey first game and i'm reading along the manual...anyways , im almost donbe with the old kitchen...
Maniac Mansion like :D Found the key... died in a hole at the left room ^^
I played a little on Wine running on linux. I like how you mixed the artwork. for your first game it's an accomplishment to just finish.
Keep up the good work and you'll earn a lot of experience in the process.
my first game was some REALLY WEIRD geometry shooter in flash.
The art is a bit of a mess, you could of put some mysterious soundtrack too. Also - arrow keys and mouse? Recipe for disaster! Put WASD atleast.
Although it is not that bad, keep on working and you can show great work! :)
For a first game this is not bad. It was awfully short though, at least I think. I managed to get 2 endings, after jumping into the hole.
no music, no sounds, but nice idea. Good work
The female scream scared me...
To answer some of you : I didnt want to put wasd , I have a non-qwerty keyboard and i always hazd probems playing games...arrow keys are on every keyboard and if you dont have to use others keys(like ctrl , alt, shift...) they are not bad...
I'm bad at art...music is worse , so until i find
To answer some of you : I didnt want to put wasd , I have a non-qwerty keyboard and i always hazd probems playing games...arrow keys are on every keyboard and if you dont have to use others keys(like ctrl , alt, shift...) they are not bad...
I'm bad at art...music is worse , so until i find someone who can help me with it...
there is a third ending but i couldnt include it :/
It was to be at least 10 rooms , but midway i choose to completely change the art, it was really bad :/
Actually the screamer is a boy , but i cannot blame you for thinking otherwise XD
This is one of the few graphic adventures has appeared in this contest, so that I give you good points.
Art its good, althought you you are bad i think not.. I think a little of music has had encouraged the party too..
Good work, keep on.
I think this has a nice premise, and can be worked further upon!
As an advice, do try to follow control conventions: arrow keys and mouse is a little strange combination.
Keep working on your games! :)
The room with 2 doors were confusing because they both said it was wrong. I had to click on one door a few times and it let me in. I didn't get the puzzle there. lol.
That because you must go in before some seconds : if you don't go quick , the monster is waiting behind the door
not bad!! great idea! good job!
Good work on your first game! Cant wait to see what you do in the next Ludum Dare
A mouse and arrow-keys feels rather finnicky and imprecise (mostly because I wasn't sure whether I should be clicking on my character, the item, or what). Mapping investigate to something like the space bar, and having a visual indicator (like a ! above the character's head) would make this much clearer.
Yeah that would have bee better , but I was a little in a panic/frenzy between the fact I never used gamemaker , the fact I never made a game and the fact that I wasn't sure if What I was doing was worth putting online... in the end I learned how to use gamemaker , and I finished a game(cool!) and friends encouraged me (they said they would kick my ass if I didn't put it online XD) anyways I'll keep all of your advices for next time !
Hey this is my first LD and first time with game maker also... nice game mandraw, I thought the visuals were actually good and also that demon really caught me by surprise lol