cakemonitor 2011-12-19 15:00
Has potential, but is too short really. Try adding sound, music and more challenges.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD22 → Loquere
By andyroth
| Percentile | ||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | LD22 | Ever | |
| Theme | 313 | 2.72 | ||||
| Mood | 320 | 2.40 | ||||
| Humor | 372 | 1.73 | ||||
| Innovation | 549 | 1.89 | ||||
| Audio | 569 | 1.10 | ||||
| Graphics | 634 | 1.76 | ||||
| Fun | 637 | 1.56 | ||||
| Overall | 656 | 1.76 | ||||
| Community | 752 | 1.20 | ||||
| Coolness | 641 | 10 | ||||
Has potential, but is too short really. Try adding sound, music and more challenges.
I like the style and text, though it was a bit short. Also the platforming is good but there are too many places where you bump your head on the ceiling.
Very funny and i love the narrative. Left puns for the win. :)
I'm liking all the suggestions. Some of them I was actually planning on adding but had to cut out so I could sleep. Maybe I will make a second one at some point.
I found your mapping space to text interesting. The platforming physics could be improved, and i wish i could kill myself at the end, even if the voice wasn't annoying.
+ Mapping text to space was interesting.
- There were quite a few collision bugs
- The gloomy-thing was exaggerated, without being funny