cjke-7777 2011-12-19 07:47
Great for your first attempt. Probably needed to be tied together a bit - maybe some instructions or a title screen. Good job
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD22 → I Fly Alone
By carloshellin
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Mood | 375 | 2.27 | ||
| Audio | 380 | 2.08 | ||
| Theme | 472 | 2.29 | ||
| Community | 519 | 2.00 | ||
| Graphics | 536 | 2.07 | ||
| Overall | 572 | 2.14 | ||
| Innovation | 582 | 1.77 | ||
| Humor | 587 | 1.25 | ||
| Fun | 646 | 1.54 | ||
| Coolness | 685 |
Great for your first attempt. Probably needed to be tied together a bit - maybe some instructions or a title screen. Good job
Not bad at first. At last it's seems finished. :) But maybe a little better graphics for the food, some instructions, hidding the mouse cursor and restart option on end. Anyway it's nice!
Really cool particle snow effect. I couldn't really understand what I was supposed to do though. Needs some more specific instructions.
Quite good for a first game. Keep it up! :)
The snow was great and the sound really helped the feel of being alone in a blizzard. I wasn't sure what I was supposed to be doing, since gathering the dots didn't seem to do anything and when my hunger got to zero the game seemed to reset. With a little more explanation, though, it could be a fun diversion.
The entry would be fine, if not for the music (at the end of your game you state it is done by someone else) and lack of the source. This is compo after all.
I've played a couple of times and still have no idea what do points mean, as they seem to change pretty randomly. Also, the game is *very* similar to what comes out of episode 9 of Flashpunk Tutorials by Zachary Lewis. I know this is your first game, but some diversity would be great.
A pity there's not a single entry in your journal.