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Oct 8 14:07:42 How (not) to kill your cat ♥ 2 This game is incredibly cute and I found the gameplay while a bit short quite enjoyable. Apart from the already addressed theme mismatch this is a very cool entry!!
Oct 8 14:15:03 7m 21s Trading Postage ♥ 3 Holy shit, I would say this game could actually make it big if polished some more with more complex art. I really liked the game design and had lots of fun optimizing my choices. I loved the music and the whole mood of the game. Great submission!!
Oct 8 14:19:17 4m 14s Cat & Swords ♥ 0 Really cute game, I understand its a clicker but I was still missing some complexity or at least some different sprites for the weapons. Also maybe if the player doesn't get a full heal after every enemy it would be more challanging as now it was rather easy as I just spammed my tap-pad. It would also benefit from some sfx or music but nonetheless nice entry.
Oct 8 14:21:50 2m 33s The Soul Collector ♥ 3 Amazing entry for a 3d game, I had a hard time with the matching game as the grass was clipping through it and the difficulty felt just right, even though I cleared it for the first time around haha, which must have been hard for a game like this. Very nice effort for 3 days.
Oct 8 14:23:29 1m 39s Holy Eggs ♥ 2 It is an incredibly original idea and I like that however the controls felt incredibly hard for me at least very non-intuitive but I must mention I am not a big time gamer so that might just be it. Very nice entry
Oct 8 14:38:17 14m 48s My Little Castle ♥ 2 I found the controls real hard to get the hang of, it would be nice to be able to jump with W however it is a really nice entry and definitely got sucked in for a bit into the game.
Oct 8 14:45:08 6m 51s Rogue of Gems ♥ 2 Wow amazing entry for 3 days I loved the upgrade mechanics and collecting new guns. However I found it a bit hard aiming with the bullets not coming out of the middle of the character I also found the rooms a bit easy and the boss incredibly hard but its a very nice game and the boss sequence is amazing. You could some kind of warning to note that the right hand does not work until you collect at least one as for my first run I thought it just didn't work at all. Nice entry.
Oct 10 11:42:40 44h 57m Prepare For Hibernation ♥ 0 Yes please update the link guys as the game seems very promising from the splash art.
Oct 10 11:54:30 11m 50s Gotta Have It ♥ 1 Hi, very nice effort and liked the game and a very nice interpretation of the style. However as previously mentioned the start page is rather simple compared to the game you could have put in a screenshot of the game without the bird or something nothing extra just something at least. Also please enable full-screen mode as it was quite hard to get it to snap in front of my taskbar haha. In the instructions also you should note that you have to actually spam the spacebar not just hold it as I spent a good 3 minutes thinking the whole game was broken. Otherwise very nice game enjoyed it very much and I did beat 50:))
Oct 10 11:59:51 5m 21s Evacuation Protocol ♥ 1 Definitely got stuck a few times haha. Screenshot 2025-10-10 135704.png But after pulling in my blackout curtains it was a really nice game, the atmosphere of the game was quite nice and I liked the directive and it was also quite a unique interpretation of the theme. What I wanna mention is that for me the music did not fit the style of the game at all I would gone for some scary ambient sounds rather than this NCS style music. Great game!
Oct 10 12:06:05 6m 14s Tiles Collector ♥ 0 Wow, amazing little puzzle game after the easy 4x4 2 colors I spent like 10 minutes on that huge level. It gets hard insanely quick very very nice game.
Oct 10 12:12:08 6m 03s Framed ♥ 2 Hi very very nice game, I really like the atmospheric artmuseum jazz, however I could not figure out how to access the tools mentioned as the mouse buttons did not work for me however it is a very nice game and with some polishing it could be amazing. Great effort.
Oct 10 12:15:36 3m 28s The Poem Of Your Life ♥ 1 Wow absolutely amazing game, it reminds me of a childrens book I used to love as a kid where the mole stole all the colors and all the animals became depressed and at the end they managed to convince him to let the colors out again. I love these artsy style of games and this one was amazing. The only thing I found very weird and confusing were the controls, however insanely nice game and good job. Also fits the theme in a very unique way which I escpecially love.
Oct 10 13:28:25 1h 12m The Antiquary ♥ 1 Holy shit, my favourite game on the jam so far, I played a solid hour if not more. Guess what requests I am going for here haha. Screenshot 2025-10-10 151623.png First off I really like the concept and even though it is basically just a matching game I really really enjoyed it and it works as a great memory game as well:)) Ideas for improvements: I would love it if the canvases/buttons were of fixed size as when choosing the filter or when purchasing something with a long name they would jump around and with the button it was really annoying since I had to move my mouse to click it again. The medium requests seem utterly pointless since most of them are so rare that I even if I've seen one or two of some I never came across more so I would definitely up the reward for them as for 1.3x it is not worth it not by a long shot, however the medium and simple ones seem to be well balanced. Also requests for furnitures or other stuff that tends to be really expensive could be made medium as this game feels more like an inventory managment game with the available 'space' being your money. This also allows for a trick where you only need one or two pieces for a request but don't have enough liquidity you can sell everything buy the priciest options for your collection make more money than you would've been able to otherwise then buy everything back at the same price. This would kinda break capitalism haha so I would definitely add some kind of extra in the price when selling and buying back at the same place. For this reason also, the 'collection' part seemed rather useless as you would just limit your ability to buy and basically throw assets out the window for no reason at least I could not figure out what having more renown did for me I reckon nothing and the theme of the game even without the renown system fits perfectly into collector. I would also add in maybe some kind of daily cost (e.g. renting the shop) as now you can just spam the new visitors until you get something you actually need. ------ All in all amazing game, I would live to see the mentioned barter and relationship system and I escpesially love this as I have been wanting to develop a game with a barter system for the longest time. Great effort definitely a 5/5 for me:))
Oct 10 15:55:52 2h 27m Can you give me a hand gesture? ♥ 1 After about twelve I just bruted forced my way through the rest with a binary counting but it is a very original and nice concept, the artstyle is incredibly cool, I definitely would've added some music but the sfx were really nice.
Oct 10 16:06:12 10m 20s The Collected ♥ 1 Very nice game, no immediate bugs or anything cool concept, I even somewhat see the theme even though I am always switching my deck around not really collecting anything. But I really like the game I wish there were multiple playstyles but I know that is not really in the 3 day scope. Great effort!!