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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | whycardboard's comment | |
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| May 1 16:15:08 | RIDDLER | ♥ 2 | Unfortunately, I didn't end up receiving any riddles in game, although the API works! Not sure if it was an issue in game or on my system, but sadly, no riddles for me. Neat premise though! | |
| May 1 16:19:35 | 4m 27s | Hooked on Data | ♥ 2 | Great grappling hook mechanic! Took me a minute to get used to the controls, and whenever you restart a level, your mouse unfocuses from the game, which was a little disorienting. I felt that the levels could have used a bit of polish, as they became a bit too tricky with the pixelated effect. The environments were really nice, and I love the spin on the "delivery" theme. Great work! |
| May 1 16:25:11 | 5m 36s | Pack 'Em Up | ♥ 1 | Great idea for a game! I thought ringing the bell was a great idea off the bat, and the little LD logo on the truck was great! I think a score indicator or some kind of visual indication of how I'm doing would help keep the game engaging and add some extra incentive to the player. I also think your sound effects were great, but a few extra ones would make the game feel much more immersive. This was honestly really fun, and has a lot of potential to expand on! Keep it up! |
| May 1 16:29:00 | 3m 49s | RIP: Ridiculously Injury Prone | ♥ 1 | Great visual style! I agree with some of the previous comments regarding mouse sensitivity, as well as inverted mouse controls being a bit disorienting. There was also the problem of the mouse going out of the game on the web build, which was a bit tricky. Apart from that, I thought the level was a great size for a jam game, and the premise of the game was great! Good work! |
| May 1 16:35:01 | 6m 01s | Deliver From the Dead | ♥ 2 | What a great submission! The "deliver the cure" was a fun spin on the theme, and the art style was great! The environment has a great mood, and the music compliments it really well. I would have loved to see some more variations in the zombie sprites, just to give some visual differences, but it was great opposed to that! Great entry! |
| May 1 16:42:33 | 7m 32s | Kirk's Food Delivery Game | ♥ 1 | 5 - 8 - 634 cause I didn't figure out I could dash until the very last room! grrr. Great submission, the cutscene?? are you kidding me??? so good! i would have loved to see a little more variation in the tileset, but the backgrounds were phenomenal, the art in general was so good. The music was great and the "Go back!" caught me off guard. Great work! |
| May 1 16:47:12 | 4m 39s | soul sender | ♥ 1 | Great music and visual style, and a great concept as well! I also though the controls were a bit disorienting, and I wish I could make some sharper turns. Ended up getting 4 people. Would have loved a way to slow down or make a sharper turn. Great work! |
| May 1 16:52:06 | 4m 54s | Delivery Boy | ♥ 2 | $1161! Great concept for a game and great environment art! I loved the little details included everywhere, from the businesses having names to the (A) being highlighted in (A)ccept order. My only complaint would be the camera was a bit too quick, and I ended up getting confused or disoriented once in a while. Other than that, a great entry! |
| May 1 16:58:52 | 6m 46s | Outer Space Snacks | ♥ 2 | Cool idea! It took me a minute to get used to the controls, but I had a great time flying around. Also took me a minte to figure out how to actually collect the food! My biggest complaint would be how blended in the asteroids are to the background. I kept dying on level two and had no idea why! Turns out, asteroids. Great submission and great work! |
| May 1 17:02:12 | 3m 20s | Where's My Lunch? | ♥ 1 | Super fun! The music was the best part hands down. The controls were snappy and the game looked great! I wish there were more consequences to hitting people/things, just to give me more reasons not to ram into everyone. Also, got caught in a corner on my first playthrough and had to restart. Great submission and great work! |
| May 1 17:13:43 | 11m 31s | Stand and Deliver | ♥ 3 | seinfeld.png Easily my favorite game of this jam so far. The Seinfeld-style music, the goofy prompts, and the AI reviews? Brilliant. Just brilliant. One of my favorite submissions. |
| May 1 17:46:07 | 32m 24s | Inbox Fool | ♥ 3 | i never thought sending bombs in the mail could lead to such fun gameplay. Great writing once again, you never fail with the comedic entries. The mechanic of the moving window was super smart, and created for some great puzzle opportunities. The problem is how long it took me to complete the game, cause I was too busy in every room listening to the dialogue. So good. The boss fight theme was immaculate, and the "resume boss fight music button" was a must. If I had any feedback at all, it'd be that the player clipping out of bounds seemed to kill me sometimes, but put me back into bounds other times. Not sure if there's a percentage of out-of-bounds that matters or what, but I thought I'd mention it. Great work! |
| May 1 18:01:45 | 15m 38s | The Pigeon Post Principle | ♥ 4 | Not even commenting on the gameplay, which was immaculate, the MUSIC and the ART was just fantastic. Fits this game so perfectly and gives such a great vibe. The art was incredible, and everything played so smoothly. Crazy impressive, one of the best entries so far. |
| May 2 00:54:50 | 6h 53m | Love Letters | ♥ 1 | Great first jam game! The letters idea was a great play on the theme, and the bird delivery was great! The art worked well, and the sound effects fit great. The animation on the player was subtle, but noticed, and the level was thought out and well designed. My biggest issue with the game would have to be the double jump mechanic. Was super 50/50 for me to be able to double jump, even with full stamina. I had to try to get the top right side letter 7 or 8 times before the double jump would let me. Maybe a bit of extra wiggleroom in the stamina bar to make that happen? The art was great, and all the biomes had great respective styles. My only complaint there would be the lack of background. Just a little blue sky would have added so much more immersion. Apart from that, great entry! Great work! |
