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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | chevre's comment | |
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| Oct 3 11:15:33 | Roboten | ♥ 1 | Thank you for that game, funny fact it's quite similar to mine! I like that you've added some narrative with the robots talking, it keeps the player engaged. You could rework the camera so that it does not show the limits of the levels. | |
| Oct 3 11:20:36 | 5m 03s | Ev'ry's 10 Second Adventure! | ♥ 1 | Hi, I'm sorry I really wished to play your game but I cannot figure out how to place time? They do not appear in the UI. I click on the piano but nothing happens. What did I miss? Thanks! |
| Oct 3 11:25:09 | 4m 33s | Launch Wobbles | ♥ 0 | Really cool, it's a good way to make a 10 seconds game! Maybe it good be better if we are not oblige to go back to the main menu each time. Maybe you could some different cinematics between each "fails" so that the player it's still a bit rewarded and wants to go on. Also, maybe add kind of an exterior view on the rocket when you change things. But of course that needs more time :-) |
| Oct 4 11:55:25 | 24h 30m | Sheeple | ♥ 1 | Really good! I'm a big fan of pico8 too. I also used it for the Ludum :-) The style and mood are great. I'm sure you can find a way to match the theme ;-) I would have loved rating you 6 stars. Keep up! |
| Oct 5 10:29:11 | 22h 33m | Machine! | ♥ 0 | Hi, the game looks pretty interesting but I have trouble figuring out how the I/O works. If I drag a red cube onto the green area and press the "<" button on the machine it does not work. You have a small issue with player affordance here. It's also confusing to drag a red thing onto a green one. But the concept seems really interesting. |
| Oct 5 10:32:11 | 3m 00s | Loop Arena | ♥ 2 | Very simple but interesting concept. It reminds me Vampire Survivor but "with a twist" (no range attack). Could you add some controls with the arrows ? Then I can play on my french keyboard more easily :-) Also it could be cool to have some powerups and player's level up mechanics for instance. Thanks and keep going on it ! |
| Oct 5 10:36:33 | 4m 22s | Tower Boy | ♥ 1 | Nice concept! Switching between the phases every 10s is pretty fun. You could you add a "pause button" though... And maybe it would be better to move the character using "click" with the mouse during the positionning phase. Also, find a way to explain why the character cannot move while shooting. Maybe the player turns into a tower or something? Anyway, good job, keep up! |
| Oct 14 06:44:51 | 212h 08m | They hate each other ! | ♥ 1 | Very fun and interesting. I like the fact you use cat and dogs for the 10 seconds theme, it's original. Keep going! And yes a little twist where you can finally know why they are hating each other would be nice ^^ |
| Oct 14 06:46:17 | 1m 26s | Rain Systems | ♥ 1 | I really love the terminal style too. Trying to play your game brought me new ideas in mind! I think you can do something really nice with that. You just need more time and reflexion about how to keep the player engaged and how to explain the game. Keep going. |
| Oct 14 10:33:20 | 3h 47m | The Game Ends | ♥ 1 | Ah ah funny how you are clicking on that thing with no graphics nor story. Good answer to the theme. |
| Oct 16 07:22:19 | 44h 48m | One Minute Away | ♥ 1 | Really nice game and explanation about your design process. I also like brainstorming a lot about a theme :-) Regarding me, I even started another game before switching to the one I've actually published! I spend more than a day on it ah ah. Anyway congratulations to you for that piece! Keep up the good work. |