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Oct 5 19:58:57 WhileTrue ♥ 1 I liked this! Cool idea, nicely executed. The graphics could do with a bit of a polish, and maybe a few more levels (I was getting into it when it ended). Good level progression, but it might be good to have a bit more instruction given to the user - I didn't realise that the instructions were going to loop until they started looping. Overall good game, I would play an expanded and more polished version of it :)
Oct 5 20:18:32 19m 35s Waves Industrial ♥ 1 Good bones to the game - there are many parts of this game that are well executed (like the way the minerals get pushed around by the conveyor belts, and placing different parts). The built-in tutorial was good to point out the controls, but I think it would have been improved if there was more direction given to it - for example, I wasn't sure what the different objects in the left pane did, and I couldn't get them to work properly - if these were given names or a basic demo was shown on screen (maybe a small working set up that the user could see?) that would have made it easier to figure out what to do. I ended up getting a bit confused and ended with a score of zero but I enjoyed it while I was playing. I also really liked the rain effect :)
Oct 5 21:40:56 1h 22m Dopamine Drip ♥ 0 Cool idea - I think this could be an interesting route to go down for a bigger game with more involved interactions. As it stands though, it's pretty easy to win by just grabbing your own flag and then letting your teammate do all the work while the red team just go around aimlessly - they don't seem to learn to chase after you if you have your own flag. As a tech demo it's pretty cool, but it's not the most fun game to play
Oct 5 22:33:32 52m 36s Mechanic in a Loop ♥ 0 I really liked it! The concept is really abstract and I liked how the levels paired up with the story (like when the character 'goes insane' the level is very downhill and difficult and far apart, and then when they get better it's a lot more straightforward and flat). I was a bit confused at the start, and fell off the first platform a few times - I didn't realise that you had to jump/double jump with space, and I wasn't sure where to go. I think if you work on it a bit more it would be good to include ways to let the player know what to do. It might also be good to pair up the narrative to the game play a bit more to make each stronger. I liked the gameplay of jumping around, the level design was a good level of difficulty, and each level took me a few tries before I could complete it. For a first completed game I think this was really good!
Oct 6 01:00:07 2h 26m Cheese! Over and Over Again. ♥ 2 Overall a good little game - maybe next time you could add more variety with the bad guys?