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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | ironleonem's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 25 07:57:00 | Massacre Monday | This was fantastic! Especially the ending, detailing the death count. Really well done! | |
| Aug 25 08:51:00 | 54m 00s | Free Medusa | Really well done! I think you managed a very unique puzzle mechanic. Thank you for sharing this! |
| Aug 25 09:35:00 | 44m 00s | T.H.E.Y | Pros: <br/>Funny game, interesting premise <br/>Interesting puzzle platform mechanics. <br/> <br/>Cons: <br/>Not always sure why I failed a level <br/>Buggy build <br/> <br/>Thanks for sharing this! |
| Aug 25 09:39:00 | 4m 00s | The monster is an human | I'm not really sure the guy is an as... I mean, a monster, for taking free money from the sky. Also, aforementioned control issues. |
| Aug 25 11:00:00 | 1h 21m | Mangiato | Over all, a very solid title. I had a lot of fun playing your game, and had only a couple of critiques. <br/> <br/>Pros: <br/>Fun game mechanics <br/>Solid iteration between levels <br/>Smooth difficulty curve <br/> <br/>Cons: <br/>1. Your levels should completely reset on death. Sometimes when I started a level, I got shot with two meatballs, sometimes one, sometimes not at all. With skill based gameplay, it's important to give the same challenge every time your player begins. <br/> <br/>2. Your controls are a little... floaty, I think is a good word. Basically, the controls feel inconsistent. <br/> <br/>Those being said, I would buy a full version of this game. Excellently done. |
| Aug 25 11:30:00 | 30m 00s | Elegy of the Night | Okay seriously, how'd you do that? |
| Sep 5 06:23:00 | 258h 53m | One Hungry Monster | First off, I just want to say congratulations. What you've achieved at 12 years old is, arguably, better than my entry :) Excellently done. That being said, I'm going to be open and honest about my feedback. The negatives I mentioned... don't take them as something you've done wrong, because, like I said, what you've achieved at your age is incredible. <br/> <br/>Here's what I liked: <br/>You definitely show a good head for mechanics. For a fun two minute time killer, this has enjoyable mechanics. I really liked the car powerup you put in the game, and I think technically, this game is incredibly sound. <br/> <br/>Here's what I wasn't a huge fan of: <br/>The gameplay is a little dry after a while. While the car did help to shake up the experience for me, I felt as though you could add more to pull the user back in after one play through. Maybe after 30 seconds, the army shows up to shoot at the monster? Something like that. Also, perhaps a random background might add some replayability. <br/> <br/>Again, over all, your product was excellent. I can't wait to see what you come up with next time :) |