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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Shmarah's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Aug 27 07:16:00 | INSTIGATION | It's so retro; I love it! Can the introduction possibly be skipped, however? <br/>The music is fantastic! | |
| Aug 27 07:25:00 | 9m 00s | DeepField | Those particles! Whoa! <br/>I think I see a lot of potential even if this game if very simplistic and a bit hard to grasp at first. |
| Aug 27 07:35:00 | 10m 00s | Insomniac | Playing this at 3:00 AM was a baaaaaad idea, but proves that you have created a fantastic, horrific mood! <br/>I suggest the usage of text tags (especially {w} and {p}) to dramatically break up your longer lines of dialogue, as well as a better point of view/scale when it comes to the graphics? Great writing! |
| Aug 27 15:52:00 | 8h 17m | Justify | Perhaps a longer pause before the 10 seconds starts just for the slower readers? I didn't finish reading so I refreshed the page, which kind of changed the effect on me, but man do I LOVE this! |
| Aug 27 15:58:00 | 6m 00s | 575 | noxiously snouted <br/>consecutives protectors <br/>caddie matronhood <br/> <br/>I think the silliness of this haiku is very descriptive of how short and sweet this game is. Pretty font! :) |
| Aug 27 16:27:00 | 29m 00s | You're a fly | Wow, I really liked it! I've always wondered what it'd be like to have a mayfly's life expectancy! It's very much an addictive arcade game. I kind of wish the enemies were a more contrasting color from the flies, though. :) |
| Aug 27 16:37:00 | 10m 00s | Every Ten Seconds A Kitten Drowns | Kitties! I loved it. I had to choose between saving an Oreo or a Sylvester at one point... ;-; I'm so sorry Oreo! |
| Aug 27 16:42:00 | 5m 00s | Bloodlust: Damsel Destruction | I'm really bad at this game but it's hilarious, and the mood set by the graphics is great! |
| Aug 27 16:51:00 | 9m 00s | Con 10 Sedi | I adore it! <br/>As a runner who has that one "Celere" on her track team, this is so touching and adorable! I'm totally getting my team to do this during the next relay race. My favorite game so far! |
| Aug 27 16:59:00 | 8m 00s | Crappydoodle | Addicted! I love it! The pressured lines are gorgeous and I wish all drawing games had them. |
| Aug 27 19:32:00 | 2h 33m | Life Flash Before Your Eyes | Looks like so much fun! I wish I had an android! |
| Aug 27 19:44:00 | 12m 00s | Pizzapocalypse 20XX | The art style was so unique, even if the colors were kind of blindingly over-saturated; five stars for mood! These guys deserve their own universe. Would have loved to see even more custom designed things like an HUD/fonts but the important thing in 72 hours was the glamtastic story! |
| Aug 27 19:51:00 | 7m 00s | Castle Clocksworth | The art and design blows me away; I am in love with the main character. Isn't she adorable? Amazed. |
| Aug 27 20:48:00 | 57m 00s | Love you more | As someone who really loves visual novels, this was an interesting one! The graphics weren't really my taste, but the story was definitely very engaging. Great work! |
| Aug 27 23:58:00 | 3h 10m | ErectServeSnug | I'd say that I'm only 15 and that you've thus scarred me but ACTUALLY this is hilarious and I'm showing all my friends ;) |
| Aug 28 01:42:00 | 1h 44m | Matchbox Ten | Kind of hard to control but very cute! |
| Aug 28 01:50:00 | 8m 00s | Count2Ten | The simplistic design is just lovely! |
| Aug 28 02:01:00 | 11m 00s | Wall of Suicide | Lol I like it! I kind of wish the characters looked a little less out of place in that background, though. The music is adorable. |
| Aug 28 04:05:00 | 2h 04m | Infected Hexes | Addictive. I think this would have done well in Ludum Dare 24: Evolution! |
| Aug 28 04:24:00 | 19m 00s | Slices of Life | A few nitpicky grammar things like "You born" should instead be "You are born" <br/>It definitely achieved the mood it was going for, even if that mood was a saddening, "Life is pointless" kind of message. I'm glad I can type fast, but the line with the numbers in it threw me off! |
| Aug 28 04:29:00 | 5m 00s | AEREO | The artwork and animation, and the original way you achieved it, is so inspiring! |
| Aug 28 04:45:00 | 16m 00s | Tax Evasion | Great idea (love the funny social commentary there), but some gameplay issues. I would have loved to see the amount of my coins being subtracted from; instead my main goal in this game was to avoid dying from sliding into a house. |