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QueenInWonderland leaves an average of 1.5 feedback comments each event.

LD45 — Start with nothing (1)

Begging Simulator 2019 by lekiy 2019-10-07T00:01:10Z ♥ 1

Hello Lekiy! The graphics are great! I would suggjest adding something for the controls in game. I did not read the whole post, I just downloaded the game. I had to hit random buttons to try and find the controls. Maybe adding a billboard in game with the controls listed on it? Sound effects are great! The little talking sounds kind of annoying in a good way like if someone keeps asking you for money. I also recommend maybe adding a visual difference between who your character is. Sometimes I lost my character in the crow of people. You could try making him look homeless or wear some sort of clothes that might represent a "lower class". Had a ton of fun with a simple game. Nice work. Keep it up!

LD40 — The more you have, the worse it is (2)

Epitaph by velvetlobster 2017-12-08T01:10:50Z ♥ 1

Beautiful art style! Although I think you guys would have benefited greatly from showing maybe the aging process, for example starting the main character out as a child and getting older. Maybe she would start to walk slower or have some sort of game mechanic to pick things up slower. Overall the mood and theme idea is really beautiful, and the coughing sound effects made the game mood spice up even more :D. I would love to see the future of this game :) Good luck on the journey :D

~Queen

Traffic Trouble by lekiy 2017-12-07T23:04:11Z ♥ 0

@serval-games Thank you so Much <3

~ Queen