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Stork

By sam-butterworth

View on ldjam.com

CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall6183.5520
Fun8843.0820
Innovation5723.3620
Theme7543.7520
Graphics1474.3620
Humor2013.7720
Mood2683.8820

Comments

alex-chertilin 2023-05-01 20:45

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sam-butterworth 2023-05-01 20:55

Click the link under the description to play. 👍

flanne 2023-05-01 21:20

Very pretty color palette and graphics. It was a fun read :)

sam-butterworth 2023-05-01 21:22

Thank you so much that really means a lot!

saffeine 2023-05-01 21:23

the dialogue is very fun and I love how the stork looks, nice work!

emily-ttg 2023-05-01 21:24

Really incredible for your first game jam game! The story was engaging, writing was funny and it didn't drag on for too long - even a bit of extra interactivity with the fight at the end. If I had a gripe it would be the lack of dynamism - particles or little animations would really have made it come to life a little bit more. Great job!

fiinrii 2023-05-01 21:24

I liked the art and the ending where you get fired.

larsievl 2023-05-01 21:26

Really funny and also moody in just the right balance,

perryseity 2023-05-01 22:57

I love the art and color scheme, and the quirky vibe of the story! It rules!

nox282 2023-05-01 23:23

I like the art, and it was well written!

sam-butterworth 2023-05-02 11:10

Thanks everyone! Love reading peoples thoughts on the game. 👍

mysticaldev 2023-05-02 18:49

I got the good ending the first time :smile:. Graphics look great and it was fun to read the story.

mrks 2023-05-16 11:32

refreshing to see a text adventure type of game. sure this isn't the right genre for quick and fun gameplay but you have really good writing and even better graphics. with music and sounds fitting the atmosphere this wouldn't feel like a jam game at all! keep up the good work!

wetburritosupreme 2023-05-18 00:24

Great job with a narrative game in the jam, the mood and art really sold it!

acearcher 2023-05-18 04:45

It's a great concept! I love the art and the mood it brings. There were a few times where it felt like my choices didn't matter (like choosing to check the cargo and instead just being told nah, it's probably fine and not actually checking), but overall it's an engaging narrative.