bassilij 2021-04-26 12:43
Good interactive book) We are waiting for the continuation of the story.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD48 → The Cave
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 3.90 | 7 | ||
| Fun | 2.70 | 7 | ||
| Innovation | 2.70 | 7 | ||
| Theme | 4.20 | 7 | ||
| Graphics | 4.50 | 7 | ||
| Mood | 4.00 | 7 |
Good interactive book) We are waiting for the continuation of the story.
I liked the art :) I wish I knew how to draw like that.
Great atmosphere, very descriptive writing!
That was a nice short story, solid writing and the images really added to the mood! I did not run into any bugs. The "waiting ..." ending felt a little sudden, I was not entirely sure what happened. The "go back" ending was really good; it might add to the suspension if you divided the text into a few shorter parts, but that's mostly a matter of personal preference! I really liked the visuals during the monster chase.