massassen 2020-04-22 13:53
Great game, but it needs some work <3
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD46 → Error code: 107222
By emil0227
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 672 | 3.72 | 22 | |
| Fun | 1424 | 3.22 | 22 | |
| Innovation | 1143 | 3.32 | 22 | |
| Theme | 1203 | 3.67 | 22 | |
| Graphics | 735 | 3.95 | 22 | |
| Audio | 3.57 | 9 | ||
| Humor | 1300 | 2.77 | 20 | |
| Mood | 76 | 4.27 | 22 |
Great game, but it needs some work <3
Link is broken...
链接进不去啊 能不能改一下啊
EDIT: 刷新了一下网页 没问题了
你滴游戏看上去还不错 我给你打分了 ^_^
可不可以帮我打一下分？https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/46/keep-a-plant
3Q~
This looks like a really interesting game, but unfortunately I don't really know Chinese so I feel like I can't give a game that appears to be pretty plot-heavy a score when I can't understand it. Let me know if you do get a translation done and I'll check it out!
@kdgame 网页已经修复啦，谢谢提醒~
@hackschnitzel I have fixed the page's visibility and I think the link is ok now :)
Link is broken. will return when is fixed and rate
@iamscissors Hi, I have fixed the page and I think the link is okay now~
Nice story, well done!
nice try! it is 'luan xi' style game! when i finish the game i feel like i just watched an amazing movie! keep go on!!! i really expect your next game!
Great game！But there still remains lots of space to complete your story. Such as, which committee you referred to in your game.
@bulubululi the 4th Division is a special department established in the corporation for system maintance. Actually it is vaguely mentioned by the clues in the game, but yeah, it needs to be clear as a worldview.
Liked the story and pacing a lot. The art style is cute. Good job!
@mobiledev Thank you ! (*^_^*)
AMAZING GAME! so much potential! this could be an actual game with a full fledged story and I would totally play it to the end xD I'm really intrigued. Bravo
@dimitree thank you so much !!
Impressive quality. I got stuck entering my name until I figured out you could use the one of the keys to delete. Z or X, I forget.
A nice experience even through the rough translation.
Very interesting game. The ending made me a bi sad but it was deep :O My only criticism is a personal taste thing, I would say to try and make it so the game remembers if you've played it before, but obviously that would require a lot of extra work so for right now this is a really great entry!
Great work! It’s got personality and a nice little story about consciousness and humanity delivered in a short package. Loved the ending too! Definitely impressed with the anime-style artwork. The translation could use some work as you said, but the story came through just fine.
Worth mentioning that I also got confused when entering my name and couldn't figure out how to delete letters. I just named myself "player" and moved on.
@riverc4 That's a really nice and constructive idea. It makes me think that if the game needs some expansion, it’s a good way to reveal more details and narrative in multiple game plus, and that maybe leads to a different (true) ending. Thank you so much for your suggestion !
@evan-minto Thank you for your feedback! I’m sorry that I didn’t make it clear for the controls. Press X and you can delete letters. I’ve updated the guidance due to the feedback : )
Fantastic game and great story! Art was very clean and nice as well! The "maze" had a bit too tight of a time constraint in my opinion, but I was able to get through it just barely! Well done!
Great music and story. It was fun to play.
Definitely not the type of game you'd expect for a jam. I love good story-based games and this is definitely one. Honestly I'm not really good at giving feedback for story-focused games, but i really enjoyed playing this one. good job!
Cool game, very nice graphics and mood! The story was very interesting
@grentacular Hi, although it's a little bit late, but I'd like to tell you that the English version is now available : )
第一次玩从头笑到尾，哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈。（你竟然想到了！我还以为偷鸡了呢，制作人在第五层） 然后结局直接懵逼。 接着就开始找好结局，但是似乎没有？？？？？？就唯一结局吗？？？？？？辣么可爱的妹子！！！！！！（或者是我太菜了找不到） 游戏很好，人物画得超级可爱，音乐也很柔和。支持大佬。
@somall-dumpling 是说迷宫外围可以走出去的那个Bug吗hhh，其实一开始发现那个Bug后就想着怎么修复，但是修复之后觉得，果然少了点自由，所以就设计成这样了。因为制作时间有限，虽然剧情可以有很多发展，但不允许做多结局了，是有想过多周目这种设定的。不管怎样，感谢，感谢支持！！
It makes me a little/bit sad. Hahahahah.
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I'll write a review about the game...
Análise...
1 - Mecânicas, Aprendizado e Fluxo: Muito interessante a história do seu jogo. As interações me desafiaram um pouco (e o lado bom é que teve check-points). O fluxo de jogo não cresceu tanto em desafio, mas como primeira entrada em Ludum Dare está muito bacana.
2 - Gráficos, Áudio e Narrativa: A arte como um todo ficou interessante e ambientou bem a narrativa. A narrativa é o ponto forte do projeto e é contada de forma clara. Parabéns pela ambientação narrativa (e pelo plot-twist).
3 - Cultura: O jogo tem muito a ver com narrativas sobre ficção científica e questionamento da realidade (Matrix, Décimo Terceiro Andar, Ghost in the Shell etc).
4 - Monetização: Creio que o jogo precisaria de bastante extensão se formos pensar em monetizar (quem sabe implementar para smartphones permita vender ele mais facilmente). Parabéns!
Analysis...
1 - Mechanics, Learning and Flow: Very interesting story of your game. The interactions challenged me a little (and the good thing is that there were check points). The game flow has not grown so much in challenge, but as a first entry in Ludum Dare it is very cool.
2 - Graphics, Audio and Narrative: Art as a whole was interesting and set the narrative well. The narrative is the strong point of the project and is told clearly. Congratulations on the narrative setting (and the plot-twist).
3 - Culture: The game has a lot to do with science fiction narratives and questioning reality (Matrix, Thirteenth Floor, Ghost in the Shell etc).
4 - Monetization: I think the game would need a lot of extension if we are going to think about monetizing (maybe implementing it for smartphones will allow you to sell it more easily). Congratulations!
@gustavo-christino Thanks a lot for your feedback and suggestions!