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How will you end your LD ?

By quorusa

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall2.006
Fun1.756
Innovation2.626
Theme2.756
Graphics2.006
Audio1.376
Humor1.665
Mood1.506

Comments

caspercaper17 2019-04-29 11:06

The idea is good but yo ucan get away with choosing nothing. Also, the music isnt great.

purpledartfrog 2019-04-29 11:21

Good entry :)

lubaka 2019-04-29 11:23

A bit confusing and i think the game needs a bit more work on art, though the idea is good. The music is just too short and i think some sounds and animations can easily bring life to your game! It has potential, but it needs work.

splicedev 2019-04-29 11:27

It took me awhile to figure out what to do. It didn't seem like there was any penalty to just press space until the end.

quorusa 2019-04-29 23:47

@caspercaper17 Yes, most validation are missing. But the game stay functional. :)

I hesitate to put the music because I'm very bad at it ! For the next LD I'll learn more for the music ! Thank you for your feeback ! :D

quorusa 2019-04-29 23:48

@crosenlund79 Ahah ! Thank you ! :D

quorusa 2019-04-29 23:51

@lubaka Yes, I began to make something which is simple but I didn't change it... I imagine a sound when the character is on a star case like a bell for example ! Good ideas ! And yes, for the animations too !

Thank you to give me your feedback !

quorusa 2019-04-29 23:58

@splicedev Yes, it's the reason why I add the rules in the menu. :) It's not intuitive.

Yes, it took validations that I didn't put on the game. Thank you to give me your opinion ! :D

furtive-pygmy 2019-05-02 02:53

Nice! A good entry. I liked the art, I would have just animated the sprites to give them some life. The music, I fell into the same trap last LD and left placeholder music in... Won't make that mistake again :p You could just bypass the negative effects, which should be fairly easy to resolve and would make the game feel a bit more complete. With a bit more polish you could make the game shine, keep it up!

quorusa 2019-05-05 23:49

@furtive-pygmy Thank you ! With feedback I realize it even more...

For the music, yes, my boyfriend is agree to remove the music ! Ahah ! Yes. My default is to think that if it's playable, it's ok. I must change my mind about this !

Thank you for your feedback ! :D