Foon →
Ludum Dare Explorer →
LD42 →
iPhone Defender
iPhone Defender
By extrone
View on ldjam.com
| Category | Rank | Score | Count |
|
|---|
| Overall | | 3.14 | 9 | |
| Fun | | 3.21 | 9 | |
| Innovation | | 2.92 | 9 | |
| Theme | | 3.42 | 9 | |
| Graphics | | 3.50 | 9 | |
| Humor | | 3.00 | 9 | |
| Mood | | 2.71 | 9 | |
Comments
Love the graphics. The call was very funny, but I kinda expected more on that, I mean you have a lot of things to go for with that call you know. I tried a lot of things to see if there are hidden gems but that seems to be it. Like I pressed buttons different than 0, 1, 2, rejected the call continuously, keep spamming 0, etc. It is a very cool take on the humor, you can really add more on top of that. I think at least you can predict that player would go back and replay the game to check out the other 2 options after the initial choice, so you may want to change the content of the call, or maybe have a skip button or something, so they dont have to wait for that again and again. Another thing is to keep the menu cohesive, e.g. here:
ezgif.com-video-to-gif.gif
Besides that, I totally enjoyed the game and the humor. Good job!
edgelord
2018-08-14 10:30
Only Windows download... :(
extrone
2018-08-14 10:34
@nam-nguyen Thanks for the great feedback man, really appreciate that, I made this game while there was only 20 hours left for the jam since my first game wouldn't package because of a plugin I used ( my bad I should have checked ). That's why I couldn't add any more it :sweat_smile:
extrone
2018-08-14 10:34
@edgelord Sorry man, I didn't had the time to make it available for other platforms.
edgelord
2018-08-14 10:40
@extrone, can you make a buld right now? html / linux / macOs?
Very good game but the camera can get a lit bit too shaky when you shot.
extrone
2018-08-14 10:59
@edgelord unfortunately no, The whole project files are messed up right now, it keeps crashing.
extrone
2018-08-14 11:01
@yohann-geoffroy thanks, yeah the camera is a bit too shaky and the whole camera system is weird. I will make it good in the next LD :sweat_smile: ( I messed up the project files of this game )
edgelord
2018-08-14 11:03
@extrone :( I'd really love to check the game out
extrone
2018-08-14 11:07
@edgelord I am really sorry man, I can't even open the project, it just crashes :(
edgelord
2018-08-14 11:09
@extrone What a pity! Maybe i'll make my self a windows vm and try it out there
extrone
2018-08-14 11:27
@edgelord It's not that great of game to try it out in a VM :sweat_smile:
djibess
2018-08-14 11:40
Your game have some good graphics but the phone edges weren't selected properly and couldn't you compress the game a lil bit more cauz 100 MB for a game jam is alooot! I'm not trying to critique your game in any sort i'm just giving you some feedback, But overall a good game. I hope you do something better in the next dares! Don't hesitate to check my game :)
extrone
2018-08-14 11:46
@djibess Thanks for the feedback :smiley:. I tried my best to reduce the size but I couldn't compress it more :( but hey thanks for playing, And yes I am gonna check your game out :smile:. Oh and I am gonna crush it in the next LD.
edgelord
2018-08-14 11:50
@extrone I do think so... It looks great!
extrone
2018-08-14 11:56
@edgelord Thanks
mza
2018-08-14 13:52
An Iphone game for Windows. I see what you did there.
Game feel and aesthetics are great. Sometimes a blue file/enemy can get in the way of the camera though.
extrone
2018-08-14 15:10
@mza Thanks for the feedback :smiley:, The camera issue, I tried to fix it but was a failure, hopefully I can tackle it in the next One :sweat_smile:
the looks good on the art side and gameplay. I only wish you made an endless/level mode that keeps going on until your phone got infected. that would be fun. maybe you can think something on that. better further on it is a good game to play.
extrone
2018-08-14 16:23
@dragongino Thansk for the feedback, Actually my first intention was to make it endless, but couldn’t because of time constraints. I am really happy that you liked it 😀
cool concept, the phone call was really funy, its visually good and fun to play goodjob!
extrone
2018-08-17 13:39
@hugo-kieffer Thanks, Glad you enjoyed it :smile: