moonlightbomber 2018-04-25 01:11
Given that this VN is not quite adherent to the theme, I guess I have to read to the end to find out the two incompatible story genres this story has.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD41 → As Vast as the Sea
By mikomikisomi
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 3.37 | 10 | ||
| Fun | 2.93 | 10 | ||
| Innovation | 2.21 | 9 | ||
| Theme | 2.42 | 9 | ||
| Graphics | 3.75 | 10 | ||
| Humor | 2.92 | 9 | ||
| Mood | 3.56 | 10 |
Given that this VN is not quite adherent to the theme, I guess I have to read to the end to find out the two incompatible story genres this story has.
nice novel and art! at least you have done something finished, GJ
I enjoyed the writing style a lot. The plot was a bit tricky to follow at points, but I think I have it figured out now after playing through a couple endings.
The music and art set a very calm and ocean-like mood.
It would be nice if the skip feature stopped a couple lines back to give some context.
It's a shame there's no music in the main menu, the music in the rest of the game is pretty nice actually - did you compose it yourself? Beyond that, I'm not big on visual novels and I gotta say [though you SPECIFICALLY ask not to comment on that it's the elephant in the room sooo sue me], I find it's a bit of a shame you decided do stay in your comfort zone on this one - you know how to make pretty decent Visual Novels, anyone can tell, and that's pretty cool - but the point of a Game Jam is SPECIFICALLY to put yourself in a situation where you'll find yourself out of your depth [see what I did there haha I like jokes] so you get to learn how to deal with this there and then... so that's what I gotta say. Who knows what you'll come up with next time? I can't wait to find out - take care :-D
I'm not really into visual novels but I really enjoyed it, finished it in one go. Very well written and it has some magical atmosphere, kudos.