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The tunnel at the end of the light

By m11

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall2.8811
Fun2.6611
Innovation2.6611
Theme3.0011
Humor3.4411
Mood3.0012

Comments

hecticgrape 2017-08-01 08:05

Overall a good attempt, and I was starting to become interested in the characters but then it ended so suddenly and I was a little unsure what actually happened. Even after another few play-throughs, I couldn't figure out the background to why he left the planet, and the relationship between Henry and this person. Maybe I missed something... The playthrough could have been improved by adding more pathways to take, as there were only small differences in the letters written dependent on the choices the player makes. But I really liked where the story was going.

faithcaio 2017-08-01 11:40

Interesting read. Would have liked more pathways for the story to go.

xaedes 2017-08-01 18:12

Enjoyable read. Mommy(my first guess for the writing person) only was after money after all? I offered her all the time but she wouldn't take it^^ So I refused to give money for daddy XP I can only approve of the suggestions hecticgrape made.

There where some funny passages (e.g. supply&demand). A bit short, but fun experience

2017-08-09 13:51

Interesting story! I included it in my Ludum Dare 39 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jUVd1KNAvFY