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The tunnel at the end of the light
The tunnel at the end of the light
By m11
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| Category | Rank | Score | Count |
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| Overall | | 2.88 | 11 | |
| Fun | | 2.66 | 11 | |
| Innovation | | 2.66 | 11 | |
| Theme | | 3.00 | 11 | |
| Humor | | 3.44 | 11 | |
| Mood | | 3.00 | 12 | |
Comments
Overall a good attempt, and I was starting to become interested in the characters but then it ended so suddenly and I was a little unsure what actually happened. Even after another few play-throughs, I couldn't figure out the background to why he left the planet, and the relationship between Henry and this person. Maybe I missed something... The playthrough could have been improved by adding more pathways to take, as there were only small differences in the letters written dependent on the choices the player makes. But I really liked where the story was going.
Interesting read. Would have liked more pathways for the story to go.
xaedes
2017-08-01 18:12
Enjoyable read. Mommy(my first guess for the writing person) only was after money after all? I offered her all the time but she wouldn't take it^^ So I refused to give money for daddy XP I can only approve of the suggestions hecticgrape made.
There where some funny passages (e.g. supply&demand). A bit short, but fun experience
2017-08-09 13:51
Interesting story! I included it in my Ludum Dare 39 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jUVd1KNAvFY